| Nov. 22 2008 at 6:39 PM |
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Does my website work?
how can i bring advertisers to it?
what method of advertising is my site best suited for?
any help will be great!
WWW.GOPURENOW.COM
Dan
www.gopurenow.com
PÜR INDUSTRIES, INC
President
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| Nov. 23 2008 at 10:35 AM |
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I'm surprised to see you pose this question considering you are promoting an SEO firm on your homepage??? I suggest you speak with the SEO firm you are promoting in order to get info on how to bring advertisers to your site....
You can also contact an ad network and see if they can rep/sell your traffic...like an AdBrite.com, AdOnNetwork.com, etc.
- Andrew
AndrewHazen.com
PrimeVisibility.com
InternetIdeas.net
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| Nov. 23 2008 at 3:11 PM |
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Thanks for the feedback, greatly appreciated.
I need to tell you that I am a brand new amateur when it comes to advertising on the internet. Yes i did make some money when i was in grade 9 going to the computer rooms and clicking on every link on my geocities website... remember those? lol
so this is my first attempt at a website, i just took a CSS template and tweaked it.
i will going to business to business and my goal is to build a business directory that are looking for joint ventures but most importantly SEO for their website.
what i want to know does the website read well and is it understandable what i am wanting to do with it?
Dan
www.gopurenow.com
PÜR INDUSTRIES, INC
President
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| Nov. 23 2008 at 6:16 PM |
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There are a three things that you might want to change:
(1) It is hard to see what text is a link. You might want to use a different color or use an underline (a standard practice) to denote a link rather than "(click here)".
(2) Your site give me the impression of a long winded sales web page. Not sure what as a business I need to do or how to use your site.
(3) Rethink your SEO for your site. Your home page title is essentially your url... not of much SEO value. The text in bold on your site - are those your targeted keywords? If not I'd suggest "bolding" your targeted keywords. Bold text affects search results.
~Roland
Web Design | Golf videos | ecommerce articles | Golf Lessons
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| Nov. 24 2008 at 9:56 AM |
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"I need to tell you that I am a brand new amateur when it comes to
advertising on the internet. Yes i did make some money when i was in
grade 9 going to the computer rooms and clicking on every link on my
geocities website... remember those? lol"
I trust that you've grown up since then. You just described 'click fraud' which the ad networks do not appreciate, and they will prosecute.
Steve Mann
Internet Videographer
MannMade Digital Video
My Email
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| Nov. 24 2008 at 10:10 AM |
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To me the name "PUR Industries" sounds like you are a manufacturer of something .... it doesn't give the feeling of being a business connection or strategy type of service .... even though you say that in the tag line under the business name, the first impression of the name throws me off.
Page text needs to be darker, to me anyway, it's just too light with a white background.
The first 3 paragraphs almost feel to me like a get-rich-quick sales pitch .... maybe try rewording it in bold or H tags ....
Creating winning opportunities is the single most important thing that you can do right now to leverage your business and to utilize your power to create more profits
M Hall
MichianaWebline
EmployIndiana.com
International Society of Curmudgeons
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| Nov. 24 2008 at 3:36 PM |
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Thank you all for you feedback,
and to Videography post, yes i am well out of highschool by now, so no worries about the feds here lol.
I'm not really selling anything here on the site,.... just yet.
I am going business to business (door to door) to promote my services and to promote my client 1800getleads services.
So right now i am just using the site as a information tool to showcase (in my binder that i go out with) what it is that i do, and ask the company if they want to be part of it.
To vwebworld - i havent done any SEO marketing, so i dont have any target keywords just yet.
Dan
www.gopurenow.com
PÜR INDUSTRIES, INC
President
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