| Oct. 12 2008 at 11:54 PM |
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I could use some help with my sales pitch for starting a consulting business. You can view my blog too to get a better idea of the content. I will be building a website geared more towards consulting, but I am building the content now.
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| Oct. 13 2008 at 12:11 AM |
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There's too much about you, you, you...and what you do, how hard it is,
and how you this and that. Nobody cares. I'm reminded of President
Clinton when he talked to the nation about the budget, saying, "I've
worked harder on this than I have on anything in my life." So what,
that's his job!
Aside from the lack of paragraph breaks (and thought process flow), you
don't at all provide any information about what you're offering. How
will you make my life better, easier, wealthier, or simpler?
Craig Landes
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Defining the undefinable. "There are 10 kinds of people in the world---those who understand binary numbers and those who don't." - Unknown
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| Oct. 13 2008 at 12:21 AM |
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Hi There.. hard to read w/ the pics.. but the opportunity sign is cool, like the blue. Anyway...Yes, It should read flat out Benefits.. and how that speaks to the prospect..without hiking up the servicer every other sentence. Not a big change...just keep it simple.. bullet it, forget the how...just tell..BENEFITS.
Erin
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| Oct. 13 2008 at 9:08 AM |
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I appreciate the feedback. Thank you! I get to caught up trying to sell myself I guess. Is that one of your points? Can you give me some ideas of what you meant by using the bullet points? Thank you for your insight, very much appreciated.
Timothy N.
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| Oct. 13 2008 at 9:11 AM |
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You are right, thank you! I am having a difficult time separating selling my ability to help clients and the benefit of hiring a business consultant. Maybe I should hire a writer.
Timothy N.
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