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hey!!
guys critique my logo design portfolio and website  http://www.logobench.com this portfolio has been made by me since 2002.. please review and do some critique on my logo design portfolio as well as my website too

 

very nice - you might put me out of business - the only suggestion is to put the comparison chart on 3 different pages - it`s a bit overwhelming to have all those graphics and checkmarks and boxes on one page.

The top half of your main page is fine. It`s clear, clean, good message, call to action .... no problems so far. My opinion though is that once I start scrolling down, it starts to get overwhelming. I think you are trying to do too much, and all of a sudden there is all kinds of info I`m trying to absorb. I would suggest breaking it up a bit and not try to get everything into the front page.

Viewing your Logo Gallery, the "Previous" and "Next" buttons aren`t working. Underneath that in the Categories, each item has the word "logos" twice, which reads unnaturally.

You have a newsletter, but what is offered by signing up?

When I looked at it earlier today, the live chat box popped up, and instantly tried to engage me in a chat; I assumed a staff member was online. In a way it`s a nice feature, however it was also a little annoying. It`s like walking into Radio Shack; usually I`d rather look around for a minute or two, see what`s there, and discover things on my own if I can, instead of having a salesman rush me as soon as I`m in the door.

But for the most part, it looks nice, is easy to understand, and looks like you put out some nice work.



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M Hall
Website Critique Community
International Society of Curmudgeons

i like it.  if any of those logos ends up being used as a trademark, make sure the client looks into federal registration.  it`s a bargain.

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James Lindon, Ph.D. Patent Attorney
Lindon & Lindon, LLC
Cleveland, Ohio
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