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MPDriver

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Sep 22, 2010 3:35 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hello,
I'm Michael and I not to long ago started McKinley Personal Driver. A Personal Transportation company offering Chauffeurs, Transportation and such.

As for my website, I have a few goals I was aiming for when i created it, however i have not quite reached them yet.

The main goal of my website is to mainly attract more clients and provide them with information about my companies services. I try to keep everything straight and to the point.
When designing my site, I wanted to make it as professional looking as possible, but still have some color and taste, all while keeping everything looking clean.
The strategy for my website is to advertise in other places, directing people to my website, and from there attracting people to use my services. This is why the design and functionality of my website are critical to me.

I Designed the site myself, using a simple Drag n Drop builder through Ipage. I'm not sure if I am advanced enough to use anything more advanced than a Drag n Drop.
I'm rather smart with computers and technology, I just dont have a lot of design experience...Good at learning though.

If i knew how, I would like to make my website a bit more attractive/flashy...Just so it catches the eye more, but still looks clean and professional. I'm Not sure if thats possible using Ipages drag n Drop..?

So far my website loads fast, runs smoothly through pages, and everything works right, however i just feel like my site is missing that something special...IDK?

Any help, and criticism is always very wanted and helpful to me. Many people have seen my website, but no one has ever told me how i could possibly improve it, and make it a better fit for my company.

If you can help please take a look here--->  http://www.mckinleypersonaldriver.com

Thank you all so much. Look forward to hearing from you,
Mike



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redfish

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Sep 29, 2010 5:05 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I'd agree with Daphne, especially in regard to the Google ad and google search.

Also, your rate page needs to include some idea of price.  Is it going to be a $300 ride to the airport?  Or can I expect something less.  With the images you've chosen and the business card at the bottom of the home page I'd assume it was expensive (as the car in the image is a really nice car).

The red is difficult - I'd go with something more neutral (similiar to the background on startupnation).

Image of your vehicles/staff are also a great idea.  Especially of the vehicle.  If you've had clients before then put up some testimonials.



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