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OK, so say your target market is a homeowner or potential homeowner. You vs me copy is this:
You / not good:
I am a home inspector and I do home inspections on the planet of Mars.
Me / is good:
You will save yourself thousands of dollars and tons of hassle by getting your home inspected by me before purchase.
(Worst copy ever but it`s 2:48 am!)
See? Follow that copywriting link above to see more examples.Thank you for your input. I took a sab at what you are recommending. Turn your sound down and take a look again please! ionhomeinspection.com
Yea. I agree to a certain extent. I am not real keen on the flash either. They thing is in my industry and the guys I am competing with have terrible websites with no snap. I get rave reviews from my clients on it due to that fact because people surf several before they call. The flash that is. Is there a way to cache flash so that is does not load everytime. Of course it is a little different when people are actually reading. Average site time is 6 minutes.The Fees is just in test. I just put it out. Not sure if I want my prices out there yet. I am not so sure about the you vs me copy difference totally. At least in my industry they are looking for me or someone like me. It`s a professional resume almost. I understand what you mean though I have fought with it back and forth. Maybe I need to contain it to just the credentials page or there abouts. The key is a must for Realtors. Almost no one has one and some Realtors will not work with me other wise.Thank you for your input! Anything else you can think of would be appreciated.Jeffrey in Houston