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How does this sound?

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    September 7, 2012 6:18 AM EDT

    I have an idea for a preventative home maintenance business. I know exactly what I want in my head, but had difficulty writing it down and wording it correctly. But nonetheless, I typed it all up on a webpage. 

     

    Could you guys read over it and tell me if it sounds ok? 

    http://www.essencehomecare.com/our-services.html


    Thanks so much!