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    • 46 posts
    April 22, 2008 4:37 PM EDT
    Hi, all!

    I wanted to share with you a recent press release I wrote. It shows the before and after:  http://iambuzzworthy.com/2008/04/23/beforeafter-example/

    Thanks,
    Shayla

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    • 46 posts
    April 24, 2008 11:33 AM EDT
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    • 46 posts
    May 12, 2008 2:20 PM EDT
    Thanks so much, Tammy!

    Shayla

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    S. Price
    info@iambuzzworthy.com
    http://iambuzzworthy.com
    Every Business Deserves Attention!

    • 46 posts
    May 12, 2008 2:23 PM EDT
    Between May 12, 2008 to May 23, 2008, SuN members, who mention this post, can receive a re-written press release for $65.00. A summer special for all SuN members!


    Thanks,
    Shayla

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    S. Price
    info@iambuzzworthy.com
    http://iambuzzworthy.com
    Every Business Deserves Attention!

    • 46 posts
    May 12, 2008 2:23 PM EDT
    Between May 12, 2008 to May 23, 2008, SuN members, who mention this post, can receive a re-written press release for $65.00. A summer special for all SuN members!

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    Thanks,
    Shayla

    shayla20045/19/2008 10:01 AM

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    Every Business Deserves Attention!

    • 30 posts
    April 24, 2008 2:32 PM EDT

    Hi Shayla, just noticed your post.  I thought I`d drop a line since it is a press release about Tape-Seal.  I have to say that I was personally impressed w/ Shayla.  She is more than prompt and John and I were very satisfied!

    Good luck!

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    Tape-Seal by Greystone Design, Inc.
    Tape-Seal Stops Paint Bleed
    602-677-1930 office
    602-434-7182 Tammy`s mobile
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    TRichardson73@cox.net
    http://www.PerfectPaintLines.com

    • 30 posts
    May 12, 2008 3:45 PM EDT

    You`re welcome Shayla.  I just wanted to give some 3rd party feedback on the press release.  We got calls from some major publications as a result of sending out the release to pre registered press at the National Hardware Show.  One publication, in particular, raved about how great the press release was because it was so well written and informative including all of the key information.  We did change a couple of minor things (i.e. added some images we didn`t have at the time of your rewrite).  If what people tell me are true, we should be included in some major publications as a result.  Once I get confirmation I`ll include links if I can!

    Thanks....Tammy, President and co-inventor of Tape-Seal

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    Tammy Richardson, President
    Tape-Seal by Greystone Design, Inc.
    Tape-Seal Stops Paint Bleed
    602-677-1930 office
    602-434-7182 Tammy`s mobile
    jprichardson@cox.net or
    TRichardson73@cox.net
    http://www.PerfectPaintLines.com

    • 9 posts
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    This post was edited by Linen at January 15, 2014 2:06 PM EST