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Wichita, KS
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  • ZoomdweebieBy Zoomdweebie 1770 Days Ago
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  • EricBy Eric 1770 Days Ago
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    Not nerdy, just wordy

    I know it`s a tea shop, but the word "tea" is overused.

    Instead of "categories" --  Choose from our select varieties...

    Shorten  everything you say everywhere on the site.  Be pithy.

    You don`t need the tabs on the left AND the Flags at the center.
    Keep the flags, ditch the tabs.

    "Where are we?"   -  Location
    "When are we open?"  - Hours
    "How can you reach us?" - Contact Us

    Revise your "special offer" wording  so that it doesn`t take the reader all afternoon to understand what is so special about the special.
    PERHAPS:

    Limited time offer:
    For every 2 ounce online order
    add  2 samples (3-5 cup)
    of your choice..FREE!
    2 tea pouches = 4 samples
    4 = 8 and so on..No limit!
    Just list the tea numbers for
     samples as requested on
     last checkout page
    [ADD CORNY SIGN OFF HERE]






    If there cannot be duplicate samples, then no, the sky is not the limit-- The limit is the number of sample types you have.
    People don`t need to know that the samples are 10grams. They just need to know they are getting free tea samples. A tea junkie might care about the actual tea  weight and quantity, but then you wouldn`t be appealing to the "normal people" right?







  • VideographyBy Videography 1770 Days Ago
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    What`s "normal"?

    I had to dig a bit to figure out where you are located.  Don`t forget, this is the *world* wide web.  " We are one block west of Hillside on the North side of Central." could describe any of a thousand locations around the USA.

    I like the logo, it`s in the right direction for branding *if* it`s the same as on your store and collateral.  I hate the cartoon pop-up character.

  • VideographyBy Videography 1767 Days Ago
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    I spoke with all three of my shrinks, and they don`t think I`m all that unusual either.


    I don`t drink either coffee or tea, so does that make me double-unusual.  No beer either, which is *really* strange coming from a kid from Texas.  But before anyone thinks I am a Mormon, you should see me enjoy the Margaritas with my Mexican dinner.



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