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If any of you have a minute, please review our new website: http://cmypitch.com Any feedback is greatly appreciated.

 

Kind Regards,

 

Will

I was enjoying browsing your site that I forgot why I was there...

I would have liked to see a less-busy entry page explaining what your site is trying to do.  You could have a members-only entry page to bypass the "welcome, here`s what we do" page.  The reason is that I had some difficulty figuring out what the purpose of the site is just from the home page.


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Steve Mann
Internet Videographer
MannMade Digital Video
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I probably won`t remember, so post it here for another review.



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Steve Mann
Internet Videographer
MannMade Digital Video
My Email

The page is much too busy.  Since people generally read from left to right, I would recommend putting the "about" box on the left side, a little larger and putting the video clip on the right, sized down.  It isn`t very clear exactly how this site/service helps business owners until you get down into the finer print under the header material.  Switching these two things around will bring the message of the "who are we" to the center stage instead of looking like an afterthought that was placed down along the righthand side.

Under the logo, the slogo is much too small.  I have to squint to make out "helping businesses succeed"

Here is an article that may help you as you modify your website.  ARTICLE.  Pay special attention to points 9 and 10.

Let me know if I can help,

 

I did it again.  What is it with your site that captivates my attention?  I don`t know what it is, but keep on doing it.  You are likely to be a success.  Yes, I like the changes to your home page.  Your site`s purpose is much more clear.

Finish the site and get busy with the offline marketing to get some traction.



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Steve Mann
Internet Videographer
MannMade Digital Video
My Email