I see you`re getting there! Congrats on the new business and your new website, it is great to see young entrepreneurs stepping out there.
The site is great, and straight to the point. I`d add a little more orange to key sentences like "your site will STANDOUT among your competition." Not too much, just a few key attention words.
Have you identified your target market? Other young entrepreneurs who need websites would be a great start. You are doing more than internet advertising I hope, word of mouth is the absolute best.