Here`s what you have as your opening sentence on the home page:
The
home for learning about geology, science projects and experiments,
minerals, rocks and My Rockin’ Collections! mineral and rock kits for
kids!
You might change that to something more fun, developing a sort of "look
and feel" geared toward kids. However, since adults (parents) likely
would be paying the money, you want to focus on why a parent would be
interested in learning about geology. Remember that a lot of people
might not know the word "geology:"
Rememer when you were a kid and had all
kinds of collections? (here`s where SEO begins--) Maybe you had a rock
collection, stamp collection, or you built model airplanes. Did you
have a train set, baseball cards, comic book collection or chemistry
set?
We offer all sorts of ways to get in to rock collections, fossils,
crystals, and geology. Would you like to learn about quartz, anthracite
(coal), diamonds, and other gem stones? All of that`s part of the
amazing science of geology.
Learn about the Earth, the environment, and everything that makes up
the ground. Every one of our kits is a great way to start a collection,
learn about rocks, and get involved in a wonderful hobby.
It`s not fantastic, but it`s a suggestion for how to focus in more
tightly on what it is you`re offering---to what purpose. In my opinion,
you intent is to "join" (in a parent`s mind) the two concepts of "my
children...kids" and "learn science," along with "have a hobby."
CraigL2008-6-8 17:36:29