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CraigL

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Jan 19, 2008 12:31 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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How about something along the lines of "does your financial management company care about you," in such a way as to tie in the growing anxiety over the mortgage problems.

It`s a press release, after all, and should be about news...not so much about a sales promotion, although that`s part of it. I`m just thinking in terms of the "flavor" of the written piece. You`re writing a headline, rather than a "title," so to speak, right?
DaleKing

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Jan 19, 2008 7:21 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thanks for the article.  Great site, by the way.  I still believe there is merit in letting people in the financial industry know what is on investor`s minds.  We all love to read research results from Forrester, Nielsen, etc.  Most of it IS meaningless, but we can`t help but not compare ourselves to others. 

So...I will keep digging for an angle here.  Thanks.
 
 
 
Well, I`ve tried to point you in the right direction, but for some strange reason, you still insist on looking for an angle. All I can say is best of luck to you. I`ve done all that I can do.
 
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