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mia310

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Apr 18, 2009 11:35 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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As some of you already know, I am planning to start a food cart business selling Japanese pancakes.   And one of the names  I`ve come up with is...
 
   "Monk`s Pan"
 
I think it arouses curiosity and hopefully get the customers to come. Also, I think it`s memorable.  However,  I`m also thinking that it might have negative connotations or potential customers might interpret something negative.
 
Anyway, please critique.    Your input and suggestions are appreciated.
 
Thanks,
Mia
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Apr 19, 2009 10:38 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hmmm. What other ideas do you have?
 
Monk? I think of the TV character or a creepy guy in a brown robe.
 
Pan?  What`s wrong with cakes?


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Apr 19, 2009 12:08 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I`d prefer Mia`s Pancakes

Double entendre.

Sexy also.

Mia xxx means "my xxx" in Italian, if I`m not mistaken.

Mia`s Pancakes is certainly better than Mary`s Pizza Shack, a huge successful eatery.



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Apr 19, 2009 3:29 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I tend to concur with Mel, above. A monk seems to refer more to a Catholic designation, here in the States, and seems a bit weird for Japanese pancakes, y`know? Or at least a religious connotation.

Plus there`s that TV character. :-)
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Apr 19, 2009 7:37 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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It seems that "Monk" could refer to an Asian, Buddhist-style monk.  However, I concur with the others that its an ambiguous Japanese reference at best.  "Monk" also evokes thoughts of fasting - definitely not something to associate with a food cart

You don`t just want a catchy name - you want a name that will attract qualified interest.  If I spotted a food cart down the street with the name "Joe`s Cheesesteaks", I`d walk over if I was in the mood for beef and provolone.  Upon arriving, if in fact the cart served only cold cut sandwiches, I`d be pretty disappointed.  Its in your best interest to find a name that more closely reflects Japanese cuisine so you bring in customers who actually want Japanese pancakes.

How about "The Bento Box"?  Its short, catchy and definitely Japanese.  Plus "Box" helps reinforce that your business is a food cart


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mia310

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Apr 20, 2009 8:59 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thanks for all the feedback.  I apologize for not explaining why I came up with the name.
The pan that the pancake is cooked in is called "monk`s pan."    They won`t be authentic Japanese pancakes, but the foundation is from the original.
 
I`d prefer Mia`s Pancakes

 
Thanks for the suggestion, Innovator.  But I`d prefer not to use my name.
 
"Bento box" usually implies savory meals inside the box, doesn`t it?
 
Anyway, pls. keep `em coming.
 
Thanks,
Mia
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Apr 21, 2009 2:11 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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A name that describes what your business can do for the prospect
in as direct a form as possible is much better than a name which
must be decoded because it is referring to some cultural paradigm
the prospect may not be familiar with.

Basically:  I have no idea what you name choice means.

Curiosity is a sad advertising strategy.  Don`t try to build a business
on such soil.





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I would suggest you look at how the large franchises choose their business names; i.e. Waffle House, Subway, Outback Steakhouse, Burger King, International House of Pancakes, etc. in most cases they all have something about what they do in their name.

The reason why they do this is because it`s easy to identify what they are selling. If I person doesn`t know the restaurant (if its not a big name like Denny`s, McDonald`s, Carl`s Jr.) and if the person doesn`t know what they are selling, then they probably won`t go to that restaurant.

By having something about what you`re selling in your business name helps people to at least identify what you`re doing and then they can decide if they want to give your restaurant a try. But if the name is ambiguous and they haven`t been to your place before it will be harder to get them in the door.

But this is just my opinion.
Hope it helps.
stevens4/29/2009 5:57 PM
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Jun 25, 2009 5:53 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I feel somewhat Monk refers to Buddhists. I think you can go for Mai`s Pancake.

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Biziness

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Jul 01, 2009 10:47 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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okonomiyaki

or

Mia`s Miyaki

or

Okono-miaki

or

Miyaki Pancakes

or

Miyaki Pan

or

Pan Miyaki Cakes

or

Miyaki cakes

Biziness7/1/2009 10:42 PM
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