Here`s the notes that I made while looking at the site:
Neat idea - you may be on to something here...
Your home page is a bit wordy, you could say more with less.
Unless you intend to soft-sell your services, there is no mention of the mailing service from the home page. I would plan for the future and place an ad for my service in the right column. In the future, you could sell other businesses ad space on the home page.
On your services page: Again, wordy. Also, too many passive words. Again, you can say a lot more with a little less.
You need to explain the disconnect from "For $150 you get ..." one-thousand advertisements and the 3,000 minimum mailing in the prior paragraph. Does that mean that my minimum cost is $450?
Composed this on a Mac, didn`t you? Your bullets in the "For $150 You Get" list are anything but bullets.
"No charge for color": Is this four-color CYMK or one additional highlight color?
Hope this helps...
MannMade Digital Video