Right away, get rid of the "Waddya think of our site? Please? We`re
like, totally nervous about what we do." :-) Blow that off because it
loses your credibility.
Secondly, I doubt many people really care that you`re a proud
distributor for 1 thing. If you want to boast, put another tab up along
the top: "Partners" or "Vendors" or "Suppliers" or something.
You have all these services on the home page, then you have a
"Services" tab. I`d try to reduce your home page list to the headings,
then expand on them in the Services page. Just move the stuff from the
home page to the other page.
It looks good, could use a bit of copywriting help, and you should use
real bullets (not dashes). Overall, it`s clear, explains who you are,
and that you`re only in New Jersey.
I`d also like a clarification on the "Hours" page that says you`re
available 24 hours a day, 7 days a week, 365 days a year. Not just "to
fit my schedule." Be clear, specific, and state your hours.
Finally, although it`s interesting to have a blog, clicking the link
takes me off your site, loses the tab menus, and unless I click the
"back" button, I`m gone from your main site. How important is your blog
to your business? If it`s important, then it shouldn`t interrupt my
visit to your site and put me somewhere else.