Jack, posting a lot of content before asking for feedback on something is not necessary. You made no mistake.
In terms of concrete feedback, your font type and/or font size changes “midstream” in a way that is a little confusing to follow – making it hard for me to follow what you are trying to emphasize.
Also, I am really saturated with people talking about how all their products and services are “green.” If you sell cars or electricity or buildings, it’s relevant. For designing websites, it is not relevant. My bet is that nobody cares if their website is “green” or not – I know I would not care.
Finally, avoid at all costs the terms “bail-out” or “stimulus” or any other term associated with Obama’s plans to borrow and spend the