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casavalridge

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Nov 21, 2009 3:01 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi all -

Was wondering if I could get some honest feedback on a product video that we created for youtube.  Production goals were to try to tell a story that creates questions about the product while keeping production costs low.

The product that the video is about is our Yosemite National Park Scavenger Hunt.  A 32 page guide book designed specifically for kids.

Video is here:  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R1GvPEsEMco

Feedback is much appreciated....

all the best,

Mike Barlow

Trailmix.Net

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Nov 24, 2009 2:04 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Mike,

Who's the video for? Is it for parents who are going to buy the guide?

My honest feedback is that the video is not exciting. It doesn't say anything about kids and how much fun they're going to have. You need to mention the guide through out the video, perhaps show excerpts from the guide and kids interacting with it. The video needs to be exciting enough for the parents to envision their kids using it and enjoying the adventure.

I hope this helped,

- Yiana

casavalridge

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Dec 31, 2009 6:27 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thanks Yiana.  I appreciate the feedback.

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