Hello, here is my take:
Immediately your site is appealing. Its simple, its to the point, and its professionally done. The blue banner graphic is nice.
I like the copy on the home page about branding and how it’s important to all businesses.
One suggestion I have is to direct the customer to do SOMETHING on that home page. There is some information, but when are you going to make the sale? Most customers wont just give you the sale. You have to ASK for it. Tell your customers what you want them to do, most won’t look around and find all the goodies on your site all on their own. So direct them to the services page, to your portfolio, or better yet, tell them to contact you with their needs right then and there. So: direct your customer to do something on that home page.
Also, I like that you stress how a business owner can use the work over and over (on website, on stationary, business cards, and so on). I would probably stress the fact that the use of your services is actually an investment. How it will both save them money by being able to use the graphics more than once, and how it will make them money by branding and attracting customers.
Your copy is generally about general information about your industry. I would want to know why doing business with you is better than doing business with somebody else. Let us know on that homepage
It’s nice to know a bit of background on you. But really I would think that your customers are more interested in how you can help them. So I would probably stress those types of points.
So yes, tell me how much experience you have had, what big companies you have done jobs for. That’s information that will breed confidence. Also, what is your experience, 15 or 20 years? It’s not immediately clear, lets get that straight and clear and eliminate any ambiguity.
Somewhere I would like to see some numbers. Some facts. How have your designs increased sales of your customers? Do you have any evidence or numbers you might give us? Have the startup companies you have done work for been successful? If so let us know. That would be a big plus. Obviously their success is not based totally on your help, but we can all acknowledge that branding must have had SOMETHING to do with it right? Give names and numbers. People remember those easily.
“graphic designer peovides solutions” – misspelling.