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GetAGrip

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Jan 15, 2008 10:50 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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I have updated my site for direct sales. If everyone can re-review it, I would really appreciate it. Email me for the SUN special discount.

tmrousey@uslnet.com

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Trent Rousey
President - 3R Products, Inc.

vwebworld

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Jan 15, 2008 11:17 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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www.3rproducts.com

It looks like every web page has the same title, description, and keywords META tags.

You should change that so each page is different and each title and description is relevant to the web page`s content.

Also, your title is too long and there is no need to put your company/website name in the title. If you want to keep it in the title then put it AFTER the important keywords.

~Roland

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Loren

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Jan 15, 2008 1:07 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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It looks nice and all.

Its a "branding" site however.... like Coca-Cola or Nike....

except you have an order button.

I would expect a long-form sales letter that ORDERS your prospect to buy the product to

out-sell this website. Its a different approach. Your site at present will invite a lot of

click-away visitors unless they have been presold. A killer headline goes a long way

towards making the sale and I don`t see one here.

There are many books that will force you to reconsider some decisions... especially if

you are PAYING FOR TRAFFIC! among the most straightforward is Maria Veloso`s

Web Copy That Sells.

Other than the lack of a headline, a long benefit-laden salesletter and a definitive call to

action the site looks okay and the advice of my friend vwebworld is accurate regarding

SEO concerns.

GetAGrip

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Jan 15, 2008 2:14 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Thanks, I am directing all of these comments to our web designer, because I honestly don`t have any idea about the lingo and what SEO concerns are. thanks for the advice however!

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Trent Rousey
President - 3R Products, Inc.

Nuevolution

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Jan 16, 2008 3:16 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Ok I want to echo VW on his findings..
If you are looking to rank on the search engines avoid using ", -" symbols in the title of your pages, those are considered stop words or symbols. And yes change them to reflect each page on your web site.. example: contact us, services and such.

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Edgar Monroy
Web Developer / Owner / Consultant
When starting your own business the need to "know-how" is greater than money!
http://www.nuevolution.net

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