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joeyatlas

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Nov 24, 2006 4:47 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi, Joey Atlas here...

My main  site is live and open to comments and suggestions. Please visit:

http://www.JoeyAtlas.com

Thank You & Be Fit !

joeyatlas2006-11-25 11:18:29


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Joey Atlas - The Fitness Shaman M.S. - Exercise Physiology http://www.JoeyAtlas.com 866-Yes-Joey - Toll Free Joey Atlas Fitness Resources 2 S Roscoe Blvd, Suite 2 A Ponte Vedra Beach, FL 32082
CraigL

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Nov 25, 2006 3:04 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Joey :-)
I have some "issues" with the site. :-D But I`m not really sure about the best approach to resolving them. On the one hand, that`s SO cool how you have the book to read. On the down side, it`s what...a Flash thing?

I looked at your main page source and you have nothing for a search engine to read. That means you`ll likely never get picked up for relevancy. So unless someone literally types in www.joeyatlas.com, they`ll never find you in the search engines.

Your page title is just the URL, and you can change that to at least say something about Joey Atlas - Fitness and Training. You can use the metatags too, although they`re debatable.

If you keep the book, what I`d recommend is two things. The first is that below the fold you put in actual text content, formatted nicely, and designed with search engine optimization (SEO) in mind.

The second is I`d like to see a logo, or menu or something along the side. I almost missed the "back to the table of contents" link on each page, and thought I was trapped on the pages.

It`s an interesting site visually, but it doesn`t reach out and grab me for fitness training, coaching, or other products you offer. You probably would do well with some tabs along the top, one of which gives your location as a Mapquest (or other) map with directions. That would have your phone number and be always available if someone wanted to exit the book and just find out how to get ahold of you.

(btw, the typo is "unique," not with a "g.") :-D nitpicking, I know...but I`m a writer.
CraigL2006-11-25 3:5:28
brains

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Nov 25, 2006 8:28 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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hi joey

I only clicked onto chapter 9 when I tried it the return to main page, the link returns me to the same page(chapter nine).

Ps where is the content?

brains2006-11-25 8:29:20
joeyatlas

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Nov 27, 2006 5:48 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thanks for the feedback ! - I`m working on some of those suggestions...

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Joey Atlas - The Fitness Shaman M.S. - Exercise Physiology http://www.JoeyAtlas.com 866-Yes-Joey - Toll Free Joey Atlas Fitness Resources 2 S Roscoe Blvd, Suite 2 A Ponte Vedra Beach, FL 32082
franpro

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Nov 27, 2006 8:43 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Joey,

well I liked it because it IS different.

I would suggest soem text under your pic, for starters.

I feel that the site needs to look more "like a website" as opposed to a website that kind of looks like a book.

good start..Keep on pumpin.

Franpro

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