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I`d like to have insight on what you think of my website.  It means a lot to me as the whole idea of it and the name came to me in a dream.  http://www.TheHolidayPatrol.com.

Thanks,
Jenny

I have a couple of issues with it from the start. First, I get a pop up about updating Quicktime ( maybe coincidence, maybe not ) after the home page takes forever to load up. Once it does, and after scanning the page,  I have no definitive clue what the site is for; other than seeing a basic concept of shipping something, the wording and images don`t clarify anything for me. If I don`t get the concept right away, I shouldn`t have to go to other pages to understand what you do or offer me.

Also, using the Homestead builder, you have bloated code and practically no onsite SEO within your pages. If possible, hire a designer that can implement better code and SEO elements.



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M Hall
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I think I get the concept, but your explanation is harsh.  You are preaching why I *NEED* you, but you aren`t articulating the benefits.  I can`t put my finger on it, but there`s something missing from the message.




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