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TheCleaningSolution

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Jan 17, 2008 9:43 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Please critique my new website

www.thecleaningsolution.com

We are based in the Dallas Fort Worth, Texas Area
We are trying to communicate that we are the janitorial services company of choice for the area.
We created the website with a template availabe to us by register.com

Thanks for looking and all feedback is welcome.

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Scott
The Cleaning Solution
"Professional Affordable and Reliable"
Call Today 1 800-757-1773
www.thecleaningsolution.com

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Jan 17, 2008 10:19 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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The flash header restarting on every page change is annoying. The layout doesn`t work; you have a short menu on the left, and content under that spreading all over with too much white space. There seems to be no structure after the top of the page.

The writing doesn`t have a friendly feel to it; instead it seems sterile ( maybe fitting for the topic, come to think about it ).

The SEO is terrible; duplicate meta tags, no doctype, no alt tags, excess code, and little textual content, etc. I don`t see the point in having so much css, and still having misused font tags in the pages. Hopefully you didn`t pay for this template ( if this is its original mark up), as it isn`t doing you any favors.

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TheCleaningSolution

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Jan 17, 2008 10:45 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Thanks for the information. The template was free, so I guess you get what you pay for.

This is my first attempt at building a website, so every comment is appreciated. I will look at changing out the format and style of the text to make it feel a little friendlier, and getting rid of the flash header.

Thanks again for your feedback

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Scott
The Cleaning Solution
"Professional Affordable and Reliable"
Call Today 1 800-757-1773
www.thecleaningsolution.com

nhgnikole

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Jan 19, 2008 6:24 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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When I click on commercial cleaning, all of your services are off the bottom of my screen.

The menu and the top just loads very oddly.

Really you just have too much going on. You just need something SIMPLE.

TheCleaningSolution

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Jan 20, 2008 9:35 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Thanks for the feedback.

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Scott
The Cleaning Solution
"Professional Affordable and Reliable"
Call Today 1 800-757-1773
www.thecleaningsolution.com

maxie

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Jul 30, 2012 2:16 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Great!!! Keep it up!! you guys are doing good job!! Stay Blessed!!!

deodorizing and cleaning NY

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