Find us elsewhere
Join Now Member Login

Taking the leap with my new website: FreeBirthdayTreats.com

 
New Topic
Post Reply
Follow Topic
Page of 1
  • Author
  • Message
 
desertdyno

posts: 14

Jan 17, 2008 4:18 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
Points: 0   Vote
Hi Everyone!
 
I just joined SUN and thought I`d jump in with both feet!
 
My website www.freebirthdaytreats.com  just went live about a month and half ago. It provides visitors with a searchable database of companies nationwide offering free birthday treats to adults, kids and pets. They can search by state to find local treats and by business category (entertainment, restaurant, retailer, travel).
 
I created the website myself using Expression Web. I have created/edited websites before so I have some basic HTML experience, but I had no CSS or ASP skills at all. To learn this program, I bought some training DVD`s from Total Training, read several posts on some forums and got to work.
 
I also created the shell of the database in Access 7 (never had experience with the program either), then hired a db person to further develop it. I was lucky because this person also knew some asp/VB and was able to help connect the db with the server. Whew!
 
I`ve tested it in IE7, FireFox and in IE6 (which isn`t really compatible). The pages linked to the database seem slow, but I`m not sure I can do anything about that other than transferring everything to SQL.

I wanted to create something fresh and new that will attract several different demographics: college students, singles/couples (of all ages), parents, pet owners and business owners. It had to be clean, simple, and easy to navigate. Something people would feel comfortable forwarding on to others. And I`d like to make an income from it.
 
I`m looking for feedback on:
 
1)  Overall appearance - colors, images, layout, etc.
 
2)  Functionality - navigation, browsers, db search function, speed
 
3)  Content: Too wordy, not wordy enough

4) Any other tips/suggestions/advice.
 
Thank you so much!
 
 
 
 
 
Imortal

posts: 98

Jan 17, 2008 5:50 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
Points: 0   Vote
First thing I notice is I went to adult, then set it for Arkansas and got this error:
 
 
I am running IE7 with a cable connection and the load time seamed to be a bit slow for me.
 
I think parts of it are a bit to wordy for me but that could just be me. I think the site explains what to do so for me reading how to click on a link is not needed I.E.  "Just make your selections and scroll through the treats. When something captures your interest, click on the link provided and a new browser window will open to take you to that company."
 
I do like the colors and the picture buttons those look realy nice. Wish you the best of luck.
desertdyno

posts: 14

Jan 17, 2008 6:27 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
Points: 0   Vote
Hi Imortal,
 
I clicked on the link, but didn`t get an error. Maybe I was uploading something. I`ll look into though.
 
Is it the whole site that loaded slow or just the pages connected to the db (adults, kids & pets)? It seems slow to me too, just not sure what all I can do to speed it up other than reduce the image files. I`ve never worked with a database connected to a site. I have a different website w/o a db and it loads quickly.
 
I agree that the site does get a bit wordy. It`s a fine line between finding the right content and not overloading visitors.
 
I appreciate you taking the time to check it out and post your feedback.
 
 
 
 
nhgnikole

posts: 2660

Jan 19, 2008 6:22 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
Points: 0   Vote
Load time is slow. If you need this to be scalable, you are better off writing it in a much more friendly way - ie LAMP (Linux Apache MySQL PHP).

It did load slow for me. I can`t imagine what it would be like at full load.

The thing about cross-browser compatibility is this: you can`t really tell people "best viewed with" ... you have to make it work on all browsers within limit. What I mean by "within limit" is that if someone is using Netscape 1.0, they are on their own. But you should at least support IE 6 and 7, Firefox 1 & 2, Safari ... Mac and PC. And be sure your code validates ... right now your html is not and your CSS is having trouble. You`ve also mixed together external, inline, and internal css ... IMO this is a no-no.

The front page is confusing and doesn`t show the visitors a clear path for the next action. A lot of the meat seems to be below the fold.

The display for the lists could be a lot more user-friendly.

desertdyno

posts: 14

Jan 23, 2008 1:21 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
Points: 0   Vote
Hi Nikole,
 
Thank you for the wonderful feedback. This is exactly what I was looking for!
 
I`ve already taken some steps toward improving the site based on your comments. I didn`t even know there was a code validator or a tool to check my CSS. Obviously I`m a newbie in this whole arena so these tools will be invaluable.
 
I agree about the home page as well. I wasn`t thrilled with it, but couldn`t seem to find the words to make it work right. I`ve come up with a few ideas and will implement them as well.
 
I know the website works fine in IE6. I tested it on a computer here that has IE6. I also know it works with a MAC because I have a friend that tested it. I have FireFox and IE7 which I test it on regularly. Would it be better to state that "We recommend FireFox." instead of "best viewed with" then? 
 
You say that the display for the lists could be more user-friendly, could you give me an idea of what you mean by that?
 
Again thank you for taking the time to really evaluate my site and provide some awesome feedback.
MoreInStore

posts: 14

Jan 29, 2008 5:31 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
Points: 0   Vote

Hi Julie,

I don`t know if this is what you`re looking for, but I have some other suggestions.

I checked your source code - it doesn`t look like you are collecting any site statistics (did I miss it?). This is a must-do.  You need to know your biggest traffic sources, the amount of time spent on your pages, unique vs. returning visitors, etc. before you can even think of making improvements and determining best traffic-generating strategies.

I strongly recommend Google Analytics (totally free).  You drop a bit of code at the bottom of each page, and voila!  You start collecting real information you can use.

In addition, your subscription box for your monthly newsletter should be on every single page of your website. Capturing emailing addresses is one of the most important things you can do.  Instead of people visiting your site once, bookmarking it and never returning again - you have permission to market to them over and over again when you have their email address.  Just don`t forget to supply them with great content.

I would also eliminate the link exchange you have - it can detract from your page rank as your links are not for similar services/items. 

And unless you are getting lots of traffic you are not going to sell any ads on your site.  I would take the "ad space available" boxes off immediately.  This part is just personal – but it appears to me as a potential customer that you’re more interested in making money than taking care of me, your customer. Besides, each page of your website should focus on only ONE action you want your visitors to take. 

Also, your header is nice (colors great, clean design), but I would shorten it up a little to about 250 pixels.  Then you have a better opportunity to put great information above the fold.  Pictures don`t sell - words do.

You`re off to a great start!  Congratulations and best wishes for every success!

~Stephanie

nhgnikole

posts: 2660

Jan 29, 2008 10:55 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
Points: 0   Vote
I wouldn`t put "best viewed on" or "recommended for" or anything else.
Just make sure it works for a majority of the people and you`re OK.

Page of 1
Post Reply
 
.
Advertisement

Keep the Community Clean!

  • StartupNation forums should be used as a platform to learn, educate others, share stories, tips & tricks and to provide constructive feedback.
  • Please do not use the Forums for advertising & blatant self-promotion.
  • Please be respectful to other members and refrain from personal attacks and vulgar language.
  • StartupNation reserves the right to delete any message, reply, and/or member who violates our terms of use.
Read full terms of use
Advertisement
Advertisement
Advertisement
Advertisement