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UrbanAndrew

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Jul 20, 2010 9:25 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hey guys,
So the name of the site is www.BMxcel.com.  This supplement is a body mind excelerant that will help people in the gym, the class room, and the work place.  What do you think?  Should I add more copy, add a chart showing competitors, more pictures, etc?   I have a decent amount of traffic but i have not sold and units.  Any suggestions you guys have would be awesome.  Thanks

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TylerWebCPA

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Jul 21, 2010 7:29 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Well done, I would drop the PayPal widget down to the bottom and have all the font match in size and type on the first page (changes in color are good, but not usually in font).

Your biggest problem will be building up trust in people, especially for a vitamin.  Anything that you could throw out that to build that trust up would be helpful.  You might even consider adding your own face and your own story to it.

Best of luck!

Westof8th

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Jul 21, 2010 9:25 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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The web site looks clean and professional for the most part.  A bunch of typos and font inconsistencies, mostly in the FAQ page.  but this is the minor stuff - I think there are two other issues that you'll have to spend some time on:

1. BM is a typical acronym for Bowel Movement.  When I hear "BMxcel", I'm thinking "accelerated bowel movement."  In other words, a laxative product.. and not a pleasant one at that.

2. There's definitely a credibility issue.  You can try selling at other venues - such as Amazon.  Perhaps set up an affiliate program and get blogs and other sites to recommend / sell your products for a commission.


Another point is that there's not a lot of content on the site, so the only way you can currently get search engine traffic is with advertising, which I think is a waste of money.  Anyway, write about your products and health supplaments, get some links into your site from other sites and increase your Google ranking..

My two cents..  Good luck.



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Omniflux

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Jul 21, 2010 2:44 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I think for the most part the site feels "Decent" but I cannot stand the header graphic. The picture of the two people is stretched and the logo as well as the photo is choppy on the edges and it makes it look very cheap

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