I think you need a better tagline. I also think sites like this should
immediately let casual visitors that it`s a geographically constrained
Right now you have:
Your complete one-stop resource for computer repairs.
Setting aside that it`s a weak tagline, I`d like it at least to say something like:
Baltimore`s best-known one-stop resource for computer repairs.
"Complete" and "one-stop-shop" are redundant. And who cares if you`re
"best known" in an objective way? :-) According to what standard?
Nobody knows. So if you SAY you`re the best-known, most people will at
least try to believe it, right?
This is redundant, too:
Most computer service companies are
large conglomerates that cannot provide individualized attention that
small businesses and home users deserve. As a small business we
recognize the needs of the individual users. Please contact us for more information on what we can do for you.
Please call us or drop us an e-mail if you are interested in more information.
Maybe a better way might be more concise?:
Small business owners often need
personal attention, something hard to find in a world of superstores,
malls, and expensive service companies. We`re a local business geared
to the needs of single-owner businesses, or people with a problem on
their personal computer.
"Tagline" goes here...about "when you have this, we solve it thusly."