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Hi all made some changes to my site added some extra stuff and removed some links to keep things simple.  All reviews are welcomed

http://www.webpreneuronline.com/

thanks in advance

 

 

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http://www.webpreneuronline.com/
Your start-up guide to online business and income strategies!

Pretty nice start.

I didn`t go to indepth, but it looks clean and simple.  Easy to use.

You may want to think about doing 2 things...

One is to create some kind of shadow or glow behind the text in the banner as it gets a little lost.  If you can find a way to view it as black and white, it will help you see contrast problems and look for areas that need to pop a bit more.  The page title is definitely an area you want to accomplish this in.

Second, there is an awful lot on the first page.  Perhaps trying to simplify the content on the landing page would be helpful.  Often times when I get to a page with so much on the home page I get overwhelmed and just leave.  If some one is interested in your content, chances are they will find it if it is easy to navigate to.

Anyways, hope this helps.


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The portfolio should say it all.


www.carboninterface.com

Also, for the video`s...Put the play icon in the lower corners.. Not on the people`s face..



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The site seemed like it took a while to load for me, and then loaded oddly in chunks.

I think the content is saying something ... but it`s vague and not relevant enough. You had the opportunity to sell me on the site with "If you`ve read anything at all about having an online business, then you will know it is the quickest way to the global market from the comfort of your own home." but it did nothing for me. Why am I there? What value will I get for my time? What`s the point of it?

Nicole hit the nail right on the head...

You got to decide what `your` overall objective is...

Do you want to build a list of leads? If so, then focus on that...

Is your goal to sell a product(s)? Is your goal to educate?

Determine your goal and focus on that one goal. Right now, there are so many distractions on the site (links, newsletters, blogs, amazon books, videos, polls, etc...). A person can easily get lost (or overwhelmed) because there is no central/primary focus.

You need to guide your prospects into taking the type action you desire...

So...determine your objectives and make that the central focus of the site.

Cartess

Thank you all for your feed back. It has been very useful and I will look to push for more simplification and home in on the focus point.

More feedback is welcomed from all in this forum.

cheers

k

 

 

 

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http://www.webpreneuronline.com/
Your start-up guide to online business and income strategies!