Nhgnikole, I totally can relate to what you are saying. When I proofed the 1st draft of my website, I saw the word `wholesale` 3 times in the 1st sentence... 3 times. I thought, "gee, this is a rather ridiculous sentence, we need to knock at least 1 of these `wholesale`s out." When I mentioned it to my website designer, it seems I was speaking English, & she was speaking "SEO". We found a way to compromise.
While SEO wording is important, I also think it`s also important to sound logical & professional to the human reader. I mean if I lose credibility with someone who clicks on my site because it seems I can`t write a proper sentence (or spell a word incorrectly), then having the #1 spot on Google or Yahoo doesn`t really mean anything, right? I definitely look at other websites from a human point of view, not SEO :).