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jay2008

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Jul 19, 2008 11:01 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I have changed the design of my site yet again. I would like to know your opinions about it. Please be blunt and honest. I can take it . I am also taking suggestions.
 
 
Also, does anyone know if a large flash  banner negatively affects seo?
 
Thanks.
jay20087/19/2008 11:04 AM
SQUAW

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Jul 19, 2008 1:41 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Well for me. I looked at your site as if  I am a customer in need of  repair..  I
think the site  is laid out well.... I liked the discounts.   I did not try the toll free number but very good.    The blog was very helpful  and after reading it  I may be able to fix the problem myself...  Having proper information  when we call for repair saves you and me time and money..  Most of us will be all freaked out when something breaks and your site  has a calming to help me stop and  follow steps to get the problem fixed.
You  got  my  vote .  Thumbs up.
A flashing banner would not calm me into  taking action to hire you.
SQUAW7/19/2008 1:45 PM
CraigL

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Jul 19, 2008 4:23 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hey, this site really looks good! :-)
On the "large" Flash! banner, it might not be a good idea yet. Roland had a post that there are changes to the basic Flash! structure that will allow searching by engins for text and stuff, but the bigger problem is just taste and elegance. Big Flash! "anything" tends to be used poorly.

On the "Locations" down at the bottom of your home page, why not have them each as links going to an actual address and phone number?

I went to "Garbage Disposals," since I have one, and there was mostly an empty page. Why not have the basic tips for deodorizing, cleaning, and flushing the water line? The content would make the page consistent with other pages. You know, the grind up a lemon thing, use some vinegar or ice and rock salt, and so forth.

All in all, it`s a very nicely laid out page, easy to understand, easy to read, and includes all the pertinent information. I think you`ll be able to tweak your content over time, but that`s easier after the overall design layout`s been completed.

HandiRecordsAnn

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Jul 22, 2008 3:38 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Jay,
 
Overall, I like your site. It`s clearly laid out and easy to follow. As a single female, I`m generally trying to make sure I can trust you as a business. So anything that tells me more about you and your business history will build credibility with me. I tried to go to your "About me" or your profile, on your blog but couldn`t really see anything that tells me how long you`ve been in business or if you`re a member of a Chamber of Commerce or the BBB or anything like that. Or even a picture and name of you, the owner. That personalization goes a long way in my book to make people (women) trust you and want to do business with you.
 
Other than that, good site!
HostRail

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Jul 25, 2008 10:30 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Nice site.  I think I recall looking at an older version of this in the past...


1. B2B needs to be written out in full form somewhere on that page.  Instead of saying B2B and then B-to-B, say business to business.
2. All the text is a bit too small to read easily.
3.  This is designed with a template?  All your pages `say` what they are at the top of the content under the menu bar.. looks a bit silly.
4.  The green bubble behind the MY in the logo and the other greens on the page compete with eachother.
5.  There is no `call to action` on your homepage.  You need an active link or something that begs a visitor to begin searching through your site. You need something to propel them through the site.

Let me know if I can help,



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