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robertj

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Jun 25, 2008 4:22 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Craig,

While the specific "requirements" will vary widely according to several factors including the stage of the bsiness being Capital Ready means (in generic terms) being ready, willing and able to move forward (without delay) through the capital process once the capital provider appears on the scene.

For example - if you were the capital provider, being Capital Ready would certainly include all the "numbers" you`ve mentioned above.

The key (of course) is knowing what you need to have, do, prepare, know,  etc. to be Capital Ready

The most important common factor is to acknowledge that the provider gets to decide (ultimately) whether you are Ready.



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robertj

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Jun 25, 2008 4:24 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Your immediate task is to stand out from that blur in a clear, crisp, sharp, concise way. It`s like these dating circles where you have 2 minutes to make your case, then you move on to the next candidate-possibility.

Bingo!!



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Dougster

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Jun 25, 2008 4:43 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hello Craig.
I see I didn`t make this easy enough or perhaps you skipped over the actual product info.
I am selling a game system. One that you attach to a standard Ping Pong Table to make it a whole new game. Millions of these Ping Pong tables are already in play at this very moment.
 
My invention is quite simply 4 clear "Walls" with attaching equipment with a new set of rules designed to produce more excitment & capture a much bigger audience.
 
 Some are at Ping Pong clubs & Schools but most are in private use, in garages, basements or other such rooms.
 
Sure, someone could build a place to house such a place & rent players time & space to play. But that sounds so much more complicated then just packing my equipment & shipping once sold & marketing the game itself.
 
The beauty of the whole process is its simplicity and ease into the huge marketplace that already exists worldwide.


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The next great "BIG IDEA"
Seeking Investors/Partners www.InstantVideoMemories.vpweb.com
CraigL

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Jun 25, 2008 10:51 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Alright, two good points from this. Indeed, I did miss that this is an add-on to the existing game. So that certainly needs to be more "in my face." ;-D

The second is that as a particular product, I think you have a better chance of building some numbers. It`s not so easy to develop a whole new market from the ground up. But to sell a particular product, that you can show a lot more easily.

For example, if you were inventing the concept of airplane races, it would be a huge undertaking. It`s being done, but there`s a whole lot of logistical integration having to happen.

So: Not that you need to actually do this here on this thread, but acting in my imaginary millionaire role, here`s the deal. I`d like to see some market research to show me how many of these could reasonably expect to sell. Who are your distributors going to be? Do you have some interest from any of the main ping-pong equipment manufacturers?

How much is the cost on this, per unit, and what`s the retail? Where would you get this made? I see that cost of fuel is going to likely exponentially increase the cost of shipments from China, so I`d want to see a backup plan.

All these specific number, regardless that they`re logical projections, serve a single purpose. If I`m going to write a check for $100,000 I want to know how I`m going to get paid back. It`s not enough that you "say" I`ll have this big rate of return; what`s your reasoning. See?

This can work, I think, and I`m certainly not an authority on dealing with millionaires. :-) But there is a difference in approaching an angel investor, who`s not maybe as deeply concerned about getting the money back...versus someone in it for the return. Then, as Robert has said, an audition in front of a VC group is completely different again.

Have you tried to develop some interest in a bank loan? Keep in mind that $100,000 isn`t all that much money in the context of this type of discussion.
Dougster

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Jun 26, 2008 8:34 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hello Craig,
OK, I think were are on the same page now. :)
My sales figures are based on my experience in sales and how I developed my business plan.
 
I already have the OK to "Show" my product off at a Local Indianapolis Table Tennis club that I feel would be interested in selling it there as well as hosting the first media`s coverage (After I get funding for inventory & my E-Commerce web page)
 
I have a contact locally here in Indianapolis that owns a 5 store national retail chain that has a large amount of floor traffic. He has also promoised me a meeting with the largest Ping Pong Manufacturer Escalade Sports based out of Evansville In. They are a huge distributor of all sorts of Sporing Goods and also have a history of buying such businesses down the road for a exit strategy if I so desire. 
 
I have a few years experience selling to College Frat houses across the country, so I expect the college market to be quite huge and I will also be following up on a friends contacts with High Schools. (Most High schools also have Ping Pong tables already on campus)
 
My demo tour will feature short playoff Tourney`s that the winner will receive as a prize a DVD Video copy that I will shoot of the action.
*Please keep in mind this age group in very "net savy" and will in effect be self promoting my "OFF THE WALL" Extreme Ping Pong game via placing these action clips on popular Video hosting & social networks such as U-Tube & Myspace.
 
My web page that I have purchased the domain name officialoffthewall.com (Undeveloped) will provide a E-commerce site as well as a gathering forum place for "OFF THE WALL" players to meet & share action clips as well. This will also be the place where National Tourney play will be posted & developed. Other groups of "OFF THE WALL" brand name products will eventually be sold there in large volume.
 
I will also seek a Energy Drink company to assist in the Sponsorship/costs of such tours.
 
I am currently aquiring  contacts within the Pro players tourney where I will work on providing Demo`s during National Championships & setting up my own future National Tourney`s to be "Piggybacked" on existing Championships.
 
I have had my own local Live TV show and have been featured by the local TV media before for other projects so I am confident that I can first get a great local media coverage to get the sales off the ground before taking it to the National media promoting its Heath & Fitness & Extreme exciting play!  This coverage will also be used to promote a future TV deal that I could host and announce for.
 
As a daily viewer of "The Big Idea" with Donny I think it is a must that this project would be on that show and provide a good backdrop of promoting this site too. 
 
*I am to hear back from a former ranked Pro player out of Seattle to discuss his Investment requirments July 14th that a friend has helped set up.
 
Banks? I consider them to be one of the most corrupt institutions anywhere and would rather not ever come in contact with them for Startup funds.
 
I am very confident that I have both the plan & the product to create a everlasting fortune. I require the funding to get "OFF THE Wall" Extreme Ping Pong off the ground.
 
The simplicity of how quickly this will be making profits is almost unheard of for anything in the marketplace.
 
I will be working my tail off until I have this great new sport in the Oylmpics one day!
 
A special Investor would be VERY lucky to be able to get on a great ground floor Startup like this!
 


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Owner/Inventor:
"OFF THE WALL" Extreme Ping Pong
The next great "BIG IDEA"
Seeking Investors/Partners www.InstantVideoMemories.vpweb.com
CraigL

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Jun 26, 2008 11:08 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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There ya go... :-D

So here`s what comes out of this role play: At the start, you focused much more on your own excitement, the "idea" of the game, and used only superlatives and feelings to try to convince me that I should invest lots of moolah.

As we worked it and reworked it, you`ve now come to a point where I think you`d be much more successful in a "pitch" to get some investment.

What I`d suggest is that you do some practicing with a video camera or perhaps just a cassette recorder (do they still have those?). Give yourself 5 minutes exactly, like when you make a pitch in front of the US Supreme Court.

In the first 30 seconds, you describe the idea completely. But that`s all you use, no more. So you might say something along the lines of:
My product is designed to modify a simple table-tennis (ping-pong) game into a 3-dimensional, "extreme" game. Using plexiglass walls to surround the ordinary table, players will now handle a flying ball coming at them from all directions.

I`m making that up, but the point is you have 30 seconds to get a visual impression. Later, if you have the chance to use a PowerPoint or photo presentation, you can get some quick pictures to drive home the point.

From there, you take the next 4 minutes (exactly) to summarize what you`ve now listed in the above post. Go with what you DO have, not what you expect to have, based on hopeful promises. So, for example, you have a pretty solid commitment to demo the game at the local club. You have a pretty solid promise on the 5 contacts, and you sound like you`ve got a pretty solid connection to the manufacturer.

Despite your thoughts about banks, sit down and figure out exactly what it would cost to build out the number of pieces you`d need to set up the demo at the club. Include in that the cost (get estimates) of a professional videographer and editing company.

That should be well below the $100K you`re looking for, but it will get you a DVD that you can hand out to your meeting participants. From there, take the meeting with the manufacturer. You`ll now have your 5-minute presentation (the last 30 seconds is your summation).

Explain to them the idea, and suggest that they take a look at the DVD. With pro editing, you could get it down to about 2 minutes or thereabouts, with music, voice-over, and so on.

ALL of this is going to mean having a protected idea, so that if the manufacturers are interested, you`re protected. You certainly will need an attorney to help on that end, to make sure you`ve got the whole idea protected.

It looks to me as though the pathway here would more likely be a basic startup loan from a lender of some kind, then a distribution and manufacturing contract. That`s my overall supposition, not being a heavy-duty business manager.
  • Get an attorney: Protect your idea.
  • Build the prototype, demo it at the club
  • Film a documentary commercial (short)
  • Take the manufacturer meeting, present and leave behind the DVD
Again, being a philosopher, not a business manager, I would suppose that if you get real interest from the manufacturer, then you also could get something in writing. At THAT point, with a real manufacturer interested, you`ll also have a much more solid number you can take to an investment lender.

Ultimately, it comes down to proof of concept and a prototype.
CraigL2008-6-26 23:12:6
kjlawrence63

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Nov 02, 2008 9:10 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hello Craig,

Are you looking to invest in a company or are you just trying to help people out that are trying to get investment by doing a role play? 

We have something truly transformational that would make an angel investor very happy. :-) If you would like more information about our company i will be happy to send this to you. 

I look forward to hearing from you soon,

Kind Regards,
Kathryn Lawrence
kjlawrence6311/2/2008 9:19 AM
Nov 17, 2008 10:18 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Coming in late to this thread and throwing a wrench through the doorway on my way in...

How about another tack? All of the below is true, no hypotheticals at all.

I have $10,000 to invest in someone`s business. A very specific person. The loan is tied to prime. The borrower can determine the term of the loan, iow, the amount of their monthly payments. Other than sufficient interest for tax purposes -otherwise the loan could be considered a gift- I seek no ownership, management oversight, profits or remuneration of any kind.

Some facts about the business that probably won`t help much but here they are nonetheless:
It is a niche service business, strictly B2B in a mature and competitive industry.
The business will not likely grow much beyond providing the owner with the means to support her family.

Ask yourself this question: Why would I do this?
Probably most importantly: How or why does the borrower compel my intervention?

If you can answer the last question above, you stand a good chance of borrowing money too.

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beachgere

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Dec 07, 2008 10:38 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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if you`re truly looking for an exciting new business.  I`ve got one for you.  I`ve seen you only have 5 million to start with. what other resources do you have? That would be a good start. If you`re interested, give me a call or e-mail me at info@glammesystems.com.  605-446-3930 I started this business 2 1/2 years ago. I think I`ve got everything ready to fly.  Call me but only if you`re serious. this  business as a potential to reach an overwhelming return.
Thank you Lance

persistent0bastard1/24/2009 3:03 PM


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