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Hi Everyone,

First off, thank you, thank you, thank you for reviewing my website. This is my very FIRST site I've ever built on my own and I'm trying to build a mailing list with the goal of promoting or live seminars and webinars.

 

What I'm looking for in this first review is basically copy writing and the flow of the site. The subscribe buttons and auto responder are not totally finished yet but the redirect should work.

I just want to know if I'm on the right track so far or if I need to make major changes before I'm done.

 

But basically I want to know if after they read the webcopy would they download the e-book?

 

 

Once again thank you and I will respond to every critique posted.

My website is

http://bizbuyinginc.com/

 

 

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Hello Stephen90210,

Your landing page looks like any other landing page. Is there a reason why left so much empty pace after the end of copy?

I would not download the ebook. Well, I am an avid internet user, and the look for site does nto come across trustworthy nor professional. 

Add a picture of you, or somethign that makes your site more credible. 

I'll leave the copy review to another who is more into copy writing. I am a webdesigner, an so my effortless contribution comes from viewing.

Bests, and keep us posted

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