Your "About the Company" page is a real turnoff. Mostly all of it.
I don`t care if you`re broke and hungry. I don`t care if all your other businesses and relationships have filed Chapter 11. I really couldn`t care less if you think that your business is a divine inspiration. In fact, everything you say about your business tells me that this enterprise won`t be around very long.
Your About page is not supposed to be a personal confessional. That you tried experimenting with family recipes and the kids experimented with different toppings is good detail. Expand on that. You don`t need to throw your christianity in the viewers face because it doesn`t tell me anything about your business or your product.
MannMade Digital Video