Thanks - Bret
I tried to see the new site, but the link went to an error page.
My first thought, when viewing the site was "Oh, this is like Cafe Press." So I`m wondering, if I was considering going into this business, how would I convince people that my services were preferable to Cafe Press? Or similar companies.
Another thing I don`t see is any compelling reason to choose Press a Print over other home-business opportunities. The main benefits you list--flexible work time, make money, be your own boss--are benefits that I`ve seen with every other home-business opportunity out there, as well as being inherant to starting any business on your own. If I was looking to start a home business, I would already have to be sold on the idea of having a printing business to be compelled to buy into your system.
I also don`t remotely believe your graphic that says "The #1 work from home specialty printing business opportunity." Unless you can reference that as a quote from a review in a major magazine, or have some proof of it, I`m not going to believe anyone claiming that their own business is #1 in something. It just looks like hype to me.
On the positive side, the colors used on the site were appealing--expressed an uplifting free feeling, I thought, which is good when you`re selling a system that will "free up" your time (presumably.)
I agree with Nikole that some of the Flash effects didn`t work well, or were poorly used (like fading-in text info on the machines. I just want to learn about them, not be entertained!) I think you could tone down the Flash a bit and still get the same dynamic effect.
Also, edit your text for spelling and grammar. I spotted a couple of errors, and I wasn`t reading that thoroughly.
I like the site overall. I would lilke to point out a few things
that I noticed as a visitor.
To me the font size can be increase a notch or two. For
the tired or imperfect eyes, the size can be a little straining.
You have your 800 number at the top very visible, great!
What days and times is this number valid? :o)
I noticed one thing off the bet, and that`s the setting you have
this building in. When I decrease my page size, the top menu
runs over the logo. This could be because it`s in JAVA or
Applet. I often keep a mid-size window.
I hope you`ve found some value in what I`ve shared.
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