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Bradders

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Mar 22, 2008 11:59 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hello everyone,
 
please let me have your comments on a website I`m building. 
 
Achieve Safety
 
Bradders
 
Warrington, England
CraigL

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Mar 22, 2008 1:56 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I don`t see anything about consulting on OSHA regulations. That`s a biggie, I`d think, isn`t it?
darrindickey

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Mar 24, 2008 1:38 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Yes, but OSHA`s a US agency. Bradders is in the UK. I wonder if there is a UK or EU equivalent that he should mention.

Darrin

CraigL

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Mar 24, 2008 2:03 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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ah HAH! I knew I could be wrong if I really set my mind to it!  Sorry, I didn`t notice this was a European company...

What I think I`d do, now going back and taking another look at the site, is put in more left-right white space. Instead of building it with percent-of-page-width, I`d narrow the left and right margins of the content.

When there`s too long a line of text, it`s harder to read and understand. I`m looking at this on a 19" LCD panel, and it`s a bit of a problem. Perhaps on a 17" CRT it would be easier, but I`d constrain the margins to keep the length of sentences somewhere around 8" long.

I`d also suggest using CSS formatting to improve the separation of headings and subheadings from their related content. Again, using more white space would likely make it easier to get across the various points and benefits of the company.

The training courses page is too sparse, for the above reasons, with the picture of the conference table so far to the right as to be almost meaningless. There`s an empty bullet, which looks unprofessional, and a sort of haphazard "feel" to the overall page.

So in a nutshell, the site needs better layout, stronger content, more organized formatting, and a more cohesive strategy.
CraigL2008-3-24 15:3:55
Bradders

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Mar 25, 2008 1:24 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Craig and Darrin,
 
Thanks for taking the time to comment on my site.  It`s been a `work in progress` for a long time now and sadly I`m too close to the project and have lost my objectivity so it is refreshing and helpful to have your comments.  I`ve decided to number the comments to aid discussions.
 
1.  About OSHA - yes, we do have similar organisations for enforcement in England. 
Action. I will refer to them.
2.  White space.  Action - I will change that immediately.
3.  Margins - Action - I will change these.
4.  Sentence length - Action - I will work to improve this.
5.  CSS versus HTML.  Action.  I will have a look at this - I do not know how to do this at present.
6.  Training courses page - Action.  I will build on this. 
7.  Empty Bullet - Action - I will solve
8.  Haphazard feel - Yes.  Action - I will improve on this.
9.  Layout, content, formatting and strategy. Action - I will solve (this may take a little longer than some of the others!)
 
Once again thanks for your comments!
 
regards
Peter
 
 
 
CraigL

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Mar 25, 2008 5:42 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Peter,
I`m using Mozilla`s free open-source "Nvu" editor, to learn a bit about how to make pages in HTML. They`ve made it a lot easier to work with CSS by allowing right-clicking on tag indicators and using menus and choices. The problem isn`t getting there, it`s understanding what each option means.

So for example, to create margins one would set "box" widths and spacing, to be very general in terms. To better understand what the hell they were talking about, I had to use many of the online tutorials about HTML and CSS. If one was a bit too dense, I kept looking until I found some for absolute beginners.

It`s a trickbag, learning all this newfangled stuff, but worth it in the long run. Even there, all it gets you is a basic site that works `okay,` but not really well. For that, you need a professional. However; learning the basics and putting together an initial site that works on content and layout helps a great deal when you turn it over to a developer. They can then see where you want to go, your intentions, and the vision of what you`re trying to accomplish.
blog2hersh

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Apr 02, 2008 9:06 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Pete,
I am web marketer for Safety Media UK. Looks like we are in same industry. Although by advising you I`d run in the danger of revealing our optimising secrets, I`d give you some important pointers to better your sites in terms of SEs:
  1. Find a set of keywords.You seem to be targeting `achieve safety` at the moment.Having done keyword research for the industry, I can tell you need better more relevant keywords. One example is `health and safety` and its variations.
  2. Decide upon on your navigation: Training Courses, Safety and Food Safety pages sound similar to me. If you need to classify on the basis of course type then just classify under Training Courses page.
  3. I spotted an Offer somewhere in the, but its not on your home page.
  4. Being a consultant you are selling expertise, so you GOTTA flash it. Create some downloadable reports/PDFs and put a system in place to capture details on downloads.
  5. I sinecerely hope you are using Google Analytics/Webmasters Tools.

Bradders

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Apr 13, 2008 5:49 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Hersh,
 
I did cartwheels when I saw you reply - thank you for taking your time to give such a thorough technical analysis of my website.   I had a feeling that all was not as good as it could be but it`s great to know exactly what`s needed.  Like most learners I built the website and thought it was OK but the more I look at what`s really needed - like Keyword Analysis, Google Page Rank / Google Analytics etc the more I realise what I have to do.
 
I will rework my site over the next few weeks in particular with `Training Courses` pages etc.
 
By the way I had a look at you blogs and sites on `Karma` and `Corporate Manslaughter` and thought that they were very well put together. 
 
Once again thanks for the comments.
 
regards
Peter Bradley
 
 
 
 
ebiznewbie

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Apr 13, 2008 7:00 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi, Bradders,
Your site is very "nice". Very quiet. Let your own voice speak through the text on the page. Add your enthusiasm for the product. Answer the question, "why should I choose you?" There are many people who need your product. Educate them about it in two lines. One very good thing about you has to really stand out--the thing that will make potential customers remember your name. Rewrite the copy to the effect: "I know who you are. I know what you need and you need me because I can get the results..here`s how...here`s proof".
Bradders

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May 01, 2008 8:59 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi,
 
thanks for your comments.  I take on board what you are saying and will raise the volume on the site.  I have added photos of myself recently so it is getting louder.
 
regards
Bradders
 
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