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Thank you to all who offered suggestions on my initial website. I have made some changes and would appreciate any critiques.

Thanks,

Christina

www.ericksontradeshow.com

I liked it - clean and to-the-point.

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James Lindon, Ph.D. Patent Attorney
Lindon & Lindon, LLC
Cleveland, Ohio
Patents, Trademarks, Copyrights, Pharmacy Law, Litigation
[this is not legal advice - provided for discussion only]
Intellectual Property for the Individual and Small Business: Identify, Protect, Enforce, Defend.
"Fools rush in where angels fear to tread."
http://www.LindonLaw.com

Well done. It`s easy to read, is clear about what you do, has a nice look, and simple consistent navigation. One thing I would suggest is a portfolio of what you`ve done in the past.

Overall, nice job.



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M Hall
Website Critique Community
International Society of Curmudgeons

I think it looks great. Good Job!!

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Our Goal Is Your Success!
Founder Girls with Goals

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Our Goal Is Your Success!
Founder Girls with Goals

Curmudgeon, sweetie, curmudgeon ... upper class grouches!


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M Hall
Website Critique Community
International Society of Curmudgeons

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Our Goal Is Your Success!
Founder Girls with Goals

This is a nice site, and looking at it, I had a couple of thoughts. I really like the three bolded, colored questions at the top of the home page. So, what if you were to use them as 1, 2, and 3 of a "process?"

If you wrote a content page targeted to each of those three points, you could then make the three questions links to those pages.

1. Are you about to exhibit? - Answer page
2. Overwhelmed with details? - Here`s how we help
3. Not sure where to start? - Contact page, with list of cervixes.

:-) Okay....list of services, but I can`t help my old Firesign Theater roots.

The point here is to get a customer journey under way. "omigod I`m about to exhibit...what do I do...!" And BOOM!....there`s a Step 1.

I like Webline`s idea of the portfolio. That`d definitely help, and add visuals to the site. Pictures are a lot easier on the eye, online, than words. That`s why I use thousands of words. I`m a curmudgeon and don`t go with the flow.

All in all, though, it`s a solid site and clearly explains what you do. It needs some touching up as to what you offer. How will I feel better if I spend the time to explore your site. And that`s where the "3 Easy Steps to Tradeshow Exhibits" would be helpful, I think. :-)

Craig!!!!! :)

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Our Goal Is Your Success!
Founder Girls with Goals

Thank you to all that responded. I was very pleased with what you all had to say.

This forum is a wonderful area for advice and honest critique. I took many suggestions from my first post here and made those changes. Now, since I revamped my website, my critiques were very positive.

Thank you StartUpNation and its members. I will definitely recommend this site to all new and "old" businesses!

Christina Erickson
Erickson Tradeshow

www.ericksontradeshow.com