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BearySpecial

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Nov 19, 2006 11:41 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Please review my site and I would appreciate any contructive criticism. 

I am trying to take my product out of the christian aspect and bring it into generalization of the public.  My product offers 4 advertising venues as well as a great way to do joint venture and or partner advertising on one product; that is loved by all.

Thanks,

BearySjpecial

beautifulpetunia

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Nov 19, 2006 11:46 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Beary!

 

I will take a better look tomorrow, but at first click, your site opens multiple windows, one being an arab-language website.  Is that supposed to happen?

Will update in the AM!

 

BearySpecial

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Nov 20, 2006 12:18 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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No this is not suppose to happen. Thanks and I will contact the site administrator

CraigL

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Nov 20, 2006 2:22 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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How does (or did) custom bears have anything to do with a "christian aspect?"

My big question is how does this site differentiate, or distinguish from such larger sites as Vermont Teddy bears? That`s going to be a heavy competitor, with their national marketing on radio and all. What would you say to me, for example, to convince me to buy a bear from you as opposed to them?
BearySpecial

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Nov 20, 2006 5:36 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Dear Craig Thanks for your mentorship. 

How does (or did) custom bears have anything to do with a "christian aspect?"

These custom bears have spiritual quotes all ready embedded on the back.

God Bless Dad Bear

Honor your father and mother--which is the first commandment with a promise. - Ephesians 6:2



My big question is how does this site differentiate, or distinguish from such larger sites as Vermont Teddy bears? That`s going to be a heavy competitor, with their national marketing on radio and all. What would you say to me, for example, to convince me to buy a bear from you as opposed to them?

To convince the buyer to buy I would add that Our Custom Bears (or other plush item/mascot) are a great Fundraiser, Reward, Donation Gift, etc.

They also help build your brand in the Community

The entire collection with quotes can be found here: http://www.angelfire.com/art2/wjcgallery/bear_impressions/

BearySpecial2006-11-20 17:38:26
BearySpecial

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Nov 20, 2006 5:40 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Thanks Kathy

The tab on the left that is hard to read was made for me and I did not want to remove or edit it.  This is why I added online gallery to the top.

The banner could be updated.

Thanks to all.

CraigL

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Nov 21, 2006 3:34 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Your Site has been Hacked! I would immediately speak to your system administator and take down the site until you get better security.

I clicked the (unreadable) first item on your menu and was thrown off the site and put onto a XXX porn site. I`m sure that`s not what you had in mine! Then, with the earlier comment about Arabic writing, it points to simply a major problem.

This can all be fixed, but you have to acknowledge that there`s a major problem first. I`d urge you to look closely at what`s going on in the site.
tjack

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Nov 21, 2006 9:37 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Please review my site. It is new and developing. www.topersonalizeit.com

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yourNAMEinDotCom

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Nov 21, 2006 10:45 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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It`s decent. Very easy to navigate and well laid out.

The only thing I would change is the menu where it seems to me you have pink on pink. A dark pink on a light pink. I`ve got good eyes and you probably do too but many people with money in their pockets ready to spend may need some contrast. How about using a white font as you do at the bottom. I don`t know, something, anything but don`t make people have to strain their eyes to read your text.

Good work though. By the way, is this is a Yahoo pre-built template store?


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FlapArt

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Nov 21, 2006 12:10 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi There,

Would love our site reviewed - www.flapart.ca

Thank You

 

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