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onthebeach

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Nov 04, 2006 7:28 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Deb,

Thanks, I`m glad you liked the site.  

It is Fortune3 shopping cart.  My partner, a writer, did all the descriptions.  He taught himself HTML, and did it all.  I am very happy with the results, and he says it is easy to use, with many options available.  It is a constant work in progress, especially with holiday merchandise coming in. Still working on the logo and other things.

I have everything in stock that I have listed on the site.  I don`t like to make customers wait, and drop shipping is expensive.  I have no storefront yet, but it is in the plan.

When you say you wish you could fit into Vicki`s Drawers, if you meant you were looking for a special size, I`d be happy to help.  Most of the site has items for S,M,L,XL, and I have a plus size section called "Voluptuary" which has larger sizes.  Most of the items in that section can also be special ordered in extended sizes that are not listed on the site, I`d be happy to help if I can. 

Thanks for your input, and if you have any other questions just let me know.

Vicki

 

 

onthebeach

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Nov 05, 2006 11:23 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Tawyna,

Thank you for the explanation, it just clicked.  Overature has a good Workbook, and I read the section on Excluded Words and it just was so general, it didn`t sink in.  You have been extremely helpful, I appreciate it!

My best to you,

Vicki

Tawnya

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Nov 05, 2006 2:19 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Tawyna,

Thank you for the explanation, it just clicked.  Overature has a good Workbook, and I read the section on Excluded Words and it just was so general, it didn`t sink in.  You have been extremely helpful, I appreciate it!

My best to you,

Vicki

Glad I could help ;)

Derek

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Nov 08, 2006 3:03 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Vickie,

Overall, your site looks good and seems very functional. I didn`t have time to scrutinize every aspect, but on the surface, there are a few small changes you could make that could bring an improvement.

I think a professional logo could have a big impact on the first impression your visitors get. As an Illustrator and Web Designer, my first instinct (with your type of product) would be to use black for both the banner and menu bar (with drop-out white type). In the banner (across the top), I might add a vignetted image of a man admiring a woman (or some other benefit) fading into the black background to add a sense of mystery and seductiveness.

I might also vignette (fade to white) a few of your product images on the homepage (of the women wearing lingerie). I think this would soften the look and improve the appeal. With all the squre corners on your site it has a cookie-cutter look to it. You can view my Website to see what I mean by "vignette."

What you may want to do is ....
Create a separate HTML page as your homepage that links to your  E-comm pages. Then it may be easier to customize.

I can provide all these customizations (including logo creation) at a very reasonable price if you`re interested : )

Best regards,

Derek
President
Annex Web Design
Derek2006-11-8 23:14:42


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moneymelz

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Nov 08, 2006 6:19 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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moneymelz2006-11-8 18:20:14


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frndchps

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Nov 08, 2006 10:13 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Vicki. I wanna partnership! JanSkin is intended to be a lingerie specialty site. I have two comments. #1. I love the sidebar! #2. I love the offer of Voluptuous sizes! Meantime back at JanSkin...can I link for the sheer expression of what a great site can offer? ~daniel~
yourNAMEinDotCom

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Nov 08, 2006 11:51 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Vicki,
You need to show more of you in there.

It looks like just a bunch of models on a reseller store front but maybe that`s the image you`re going for. If so, never mind this comment.


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