Hi Vicky,
Looks good.
Some comments,
The header should cover the entirety of the page, unless you intend to put something else on to the right of “Vicki’s Drawers” make the color of the background the same color as your jpg.
I use a bare bones Fx browser, in that environment some of the pages behave oddly on your site this is a partial
screen capture of the ‘flirt’ page, you can see how the lines jump over to the next cell.
Your ‘Terms’ page is blank (I’m certain it’s not an oversight but work in progress)
On your privacy page I would change
“However, we cannot be responsible for how third parties, whose links appear on our site, use your information.”
to something along the lines of
“to find out how they will use this information read their privacy policies <link to them>”
This part I really don’t like
“Vicki`s Drawers does not sell or commercially make available specific information about its Users or Users other than in aggregate form, except in cooperation with law enforcement bodies in regards to content violations or violations of applicable laws.”
So, how do you sell it? I know you sell it in aggregate form, the fact that you are selling it at all makes me uneasy, regardless of how you are selling it.
This does not make me feel secure
“Vicki`s Drawers has implemented additional precautions to ensure the privacy of your personal information. We have a strict firewall in place which does not allow any outside access. Access in the company is limited to only individuals who need to be able to see customer data in order to perform their job functions, such as the billing department. Important personal data is backed up on the network to help insure its integrity.”
I would change that to something along the lines of
“No personal information is kept on-line (if that is the case)”and eliminate the back-up reference. All that other verbiage makes me think that YOU don’t trust all your employees, if you don’t, why should I?
I would eliminate
“You may choose not to receive special offers and discounts simply by not registering for any special deals and offers when you sign up”
I would think that is self explanatory.
On your FAQ’s
I don’t like this at all
“Yes, your personal information is securely stored in our Ecommerce database with the same SSL 128-bit encryption. You have the option to make this information available for future orders when logging in, so that you do not have to type it again when you come back and shop from us.”
You mean to tell me that my credit card number and all personal info is on the net? Protected by only your server’s security? I wouldn’t spend a penny there. If you must keep such information it should be kept on a server that IS NOT on the net, any server can be hacked, specially if you are telling the would be hackers “lookie here! I’ve got all these goodies just waiting for you...”
Good luck!
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