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CraigL

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Feb 09, 2007 4:59 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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This is a whole lot better! You still have a problem where the text on your products pages is crowding the margins of your images, but that`s just a margin thing. I`d like to see two changes though, overall.

In the menus, I`d want a "Contact Us" option, because it`s still very hard to see your email address down in the brown bar at the bottom. I`d also like a better way to know which page I`m viewing when I click a menu item. Perhaps change its color, or put a title that matches on each page. I found I`d go to one of the products, then have to hit the "home" button because I didn`t know which menu button I was on.

The logo is WAY more clear now, and still looks very good. Later, before you start putting it on everything, you can decide if it`s what you want to live with, but this is good. I`d like to be able to click on that logo to return to the home page. That`s a standard Web site feature.

But yeah...definitely a whole lot better for a working draft. :-D
CampSteve

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Feb 10, 2007 12:36 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Logo looks a little better. I mean, it`s still very amateurish but I realize
you`re not at the point where you would hire a designer. Honestly
though, it`s a terrible font to use. That short F is not a good letter.
Choose an easy to read font.
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