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I have finely updated my website. I would to get feedback from the community. It`s http://www.homeinventoryspecialistsllc.com


Thank you,

You`re not catching me with your front page.

Think ... personal. Disasters happen. Will you get the full amount of your insurance claim when it happens to you?

OK that was bad, maybe you get the gist. Work on your copywriting.

Thanks nhgnikole. You`re right about making my home page more personal.  Check it out now. I just re-did it and make it more personal. Also there is a call to action. How`s that?

Thanks again for the feedback.

Caricc:

#1  I went through the entire Website and still do not know in what geographical area you work in.  Do you offer this service nationwide?  In a particular city in Indiana?

I found your 800 telephone number listed on only one page.

People will not take the time to navigate your entire site for relevant information.

#2  Personally. I`ve been in the electronic security business for 28 years.  Frankly, I do not like scare tactics.  People buy security and warm, fuzzy feelings.  Sleeping well at night.  This is a tough sell in a weak economy.

#3  Re:  SEO needs work.  Need to add content for search engines... MetaTags need work.  There are no keywords listed.....



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Your site would actually be a perfect candidate for customer targeted content. If you`re the programming sort, you can easily link the site to realtime geoip locating, which will allow you to target customers based specifically on their location. That is if you operate in a lot of places. I tried looking it up but your site gave me a 404 if i tried to go anywhere but the home page, i`m assuming you`re working on the design.
If you`re the developer type i`d recommend getting wamp or lamp, and copy the site to your computer and develop everything locally. This way visitors don`t get interrupted while changes are made..

Never mind, everything seems to be working now. Not sure if you were testing anything or if it was a temporary server glitch.

I agree I don`t like the harsh scare tactics ... I`d prefer you sell me on warm fuzzies.

Maybe look at what life insurance does?