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Way too busy, for my tastes. I glanced at the two sites and there was so much content crowded together I just got exhausted. 

i agree.  too many links.

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I think what would be more effective is to make the manufacturer names more prominent .... you have a lot of small text, and it makes it harder for a viewer to see brand names front and center in the middle of all of this, which I would think is what they want to see .... maybe take their logos, and make them the menu tabs at the top of the page for the auto rentals, for example .... basically, get their names front and center.

Don`t try to give the reader everything in one shot .... it gets too overwhelming ....



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M Hall
Website Critique Community
International Society of Curmudgeons

It is a bit cluttered, but useable - I just used it to find a discount for an upcoming trip.

You should, however, test links frequently because at least two related to American Express are broken.

Steve Mann




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Steve Mann
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rental one is not impressive and it seems less useful before you start doing something (which you may not want to). i clicked on one linked and wanted to get back, was not obvious to click on the logi. i miss the overall pronounced value prop, so many are out there.
on electronics it is more relevant but very buzy, fonts are small, accents are not very evident.
hope it helps.