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edarrnell

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Jan 21, 2008 1:55 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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I have had this website for almost a year now and have updated it several time with affiliate links for content based on my personal productivity library of 20 years.

My mission is to help other like minded entrepreneurs get value from the discounts and coupons that my parner companies have provided me.

www.erickdarrnell.com

What can I do to improve my converstion rates?

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Jan 22, 2008 7:07 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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It`s a bit confusing. What is the message supposed to be? It starts off like a combination "What I Offer / About Me" page; I`m thinking it should start off by telling me what you`re offering me before anything else. Is it advice? Tutorials? Or ads? You need to state right away what your site is for, and what it is offering the user viewing it. If it is primarily ads, then you need to clarify that upfront so we know what we will be seeing, not make us wonder why its all ad campaigns/product promos, and feel cheated if there isn`t a whole lot of content.

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edarrnell

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Jan 22, 2008 6:53 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Thanks for the critique M Hall.

I can rewrite my home page with more direct to the point content on what I have to offer based on my experience and use my affiliate links to recommend products.

My ultimate goal for my website is to sell productivity solutions to enhance the performance of people on the grow.

E. Darrnell

www.erickdarrnell.com

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