Hello, I would appreciate it if someone would critique my website. This is only my 2nd month and I created it myself.
I went to your web site and the first thing that popped out at me was all that text.
I like to read and be informed when I visit a web site of interest, but if there is too much text to weed through before I get to the point of why I am there, I usually leave.
Here is what I suggest. Place relevant pictures to your text, to help guide visitors to what information they are looking for. Keep the text short and sweet. Also get right to the point of what you are selling and put links to your shopping pages. Also make the pictures link to your products store or to give more information about it.
Hope I have helped.