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katt33

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Apr 19, 2008 9:34 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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www.katesecoshop.com Hello everyone. I will put pictures up as soon as I can. Other than that, can you please give me as much constructive feedback as possible. It is very frustrating when let`s say 25 read, and none critique, so please ake a look at it and critique.

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Apr 20, 2008 10:39 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Personally, I think your main page text is too large and bold; it doesn`t fit your sites image. Try to soften it and make it a little smaller.

Some pages, your text is all run together in one paragraph. Break it up a little, and use bulleted sections to make your products features and benefits easier for a reader to find them.

Your header image is nice, but it doesn`t tell your visitors anything. It is normal for visitors to look at this area first and instantly see a site name, a tag line, something to make the site identifiable right away.

Make your page titles more descriptive and unique; this is a major factor for search results.

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vwebworld

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Apr 20, 2008 12:40 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Definitely change the text from bold to normal.

Your html code has a lot of empty lines. Sometime this is done with the idea of protecting your code from being copied maybe because you`re using a "sitebuilder". It is not effective, plus not search engine friendly.

Your images are ok, but as noted do not really communicate a message related to your product/site.

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katt33

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Apr 20, 2008 1:31 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Thank You. Very helpful I am using a sitebuilder. I will work on it this week.

SiteFlipAcademy

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Apr 21, 2008 5:41 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Hello Katherine, just visited your site. I agree at above`s comment about your font style. Changing it from bold to regular to have a standard and clean look. I like your design, its cool to the viewer.

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katt33

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Apr 22, 2008 1:25 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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I have to figure out how to change the font on the page. I am working on that. Thank YOU.

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