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Hi All,

 

I`m a newer member and I`m hoping you guys can help me out. Myself and my business partner have a new website and I`d really appreciate some feedback. We are in the process of updates and we are changing the format a bit but I`d still like to see what you think so far.

 

If you get a chance please take a look and give me an idea of what you think.

 

Thanks so much!

 

Sharon Curtis

 

http://www.revolutionbeauty.com

I like it!  My only comment is that the pink letters on a white background on the left of the homepage are hard to read.  But that is really minor.  Over all I like the rough edged boxes and it looks like a site worth coming back to.  Obviously you are targeting a female demo and I think you have made it look good for that demo.

 

good luck.

I think it is a great start.. I am hooked on the makeup app videos.. definatley bookmarking. I am a sucker for all things beauty!! Thanks for sharing and I am certain that you will do well. I will leave the coding and stylizing critiques to those experts. I can say from a consumer POV that I am enjoying it! I am already looking at the burgandy mascara at Nordstroms.

 

Erin

Nice looking site - now it`s time to optimize it (SEO) so that it doesn`t scare off the search engines.  Which it probably is doing, right now - the site`s very large, with lots of code bloat and some significant errors that both slow its performance and deter spiders (and therefore good ranking and traffic)...for example, here`s the keyword density for the top 3-word phrases from a particular tool....note that this tool is uncovering some errors in your style sheet coding, which make the inline style sheet code itself candidate for keyword indexing - that`s not a good thing.

 

With some good SEO, your 3-word keyphrases should be things like "beauty secrets online", "revolution beauty products", "online beauty forum", etc....not these messed up html code phrases.

 

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trebuchet ms times	3	1.61%
times serif style	2	1.08%
size px font	2	1.08%
beauty icon win	2	1.08%
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