WAY better! Now be sure to leave some room for a couple of examples of
sports cards, so people can instantly see what this site is about. Then
you`ll want to have categories, particularly divided up into particular
sports. I`m thinking another category for especially expensive "rare"
But this, in my opinion, is definitely a much better direction you`re
moving in. :-) I`d suggest the home page title should be more
descriptive of your business, not the name of the business. Maybe
something like, "Safe Tradz Sport Card Collectors." It`ll help with
SEO, but also have a more obvious description when you`re found in a
Be sure to also come up with a solid 20-word description of your site
and put that into the meta tag for descriptions. Tighten up the main
intro, because it`s very good and says everything without too much
Safe Tradz is the online trading center
for sports card collectors across the United States. Our goal to make a
trading cards easier, safer, and more enjoyable. We offer a variety of
inexpensive services to our members, including:
- Feature 1
- Feature 2
- Feature 3
Make each feature a link to your "features and benefits"
page---"Services" maybe, and take the viewer to the specific
description on that page of that feature.