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Hello.

New SuN member here!

Love to hear your comments on my new website

www.thevinbin.com

In the words of Frank, "Carpe Vinum"
Rick and Julie Lombardi

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The Vin Bin - Wine, Cheese, Bread & Brew - www.thevinbin.com

I think that the front font is too small, and the page too wordy. You switch back and forth between talking about yourself and telling me what`s in it for me - you should probably stick to telling me what`s in it for me. (See: Copywriting)

The free tasting board is below the fold for me, but it`s a big selling point! Can it be brought up more?

I like the food pictures ... they evoke a certain feeling and emotion for me, makes the content enticing while I`m thinking "mmmmmm wine and cheese!"

Nikole:
Thanks some things to consider seriously.

Rick & Julie Lombardi

The Vin Bin www.thevinbin.com

 

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The Vin Bin - Wine, Cheese, Bread & Brew - www.thevinbin.com

The site looks great.

I agree with Nikole about the text size. The one additional thing I`d suggest is to think about whether or not the roll-over descriptions of the links are really necessary. For example, your "About Us" link pretty much tells you that the link will take you to a page about you. You may not really need to have the roll-over. It could be a bit distracting, and some folks might try to mouse down to the roll-over text thinking it`s a link.

Otherwise, a fine job.




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pkamm  & nhgnikole  Thank You!

I will definitely take all the ideas presented here and really consider them!
Rick Lombardi

www.thevinbin.com

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The Vin Bin - Wine, Cheese, Bread & Brew - www.thevinbin.com