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Ripose

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Jul 29, 2009 1:38 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Because of ease and speed of development I have created my site using Google Sites.
When you visit http://darcypeal.com/ you will be forwarded to my google site.

I`m not easily offended so please be honest and shoot down ANYTHING you don`t like.

NOTE: Slide shows will not display in IE8!

Have a great day/night everyone!

Videography

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Jul 29, 2009 11:20 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I like the color scheme, but I will be in the minority.  Just curious, but are the Google ads for your competition the price for a Google website?

But, since you seem to be headlining image restoration, where are the examples?



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MannMade Digital Video
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Ripose

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Jul 29, 2009 1:15 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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The only Google ID required on the site is the Footer.
I have the AdSense links just out of curiosity.

Good point, the images are not ready for publishing.
Why didn`t I change the site to reflect this? I really don`t know.

What specifically is wrong with my color scheme?

Thank you for time & input Steve!
Videography

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Jul 29, 2009 5:01 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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As I said, I like white on black, but I am in the minority.  Most reviewers will prefer black on white or some other combination other than white on black.


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MannMade Digital Video
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Jarrod1937

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Jul 29, 2009 7:15 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Since your website`s purpose is to house your work, i hope you don`t mind me critiquing those.
But, from a fellow graphic artist/photoshoper/3d artist, your samples need to be self-critiqued more harshly. A portfolio should represent the top tier of a persons` work, and i see a mixture of quality levels in your samples. For your logo`s some of them have nice designs, others have bland ones. Some have excellent color choices, some ignore basic color theory and contrast. For your 3d, most of your examples should not be there t be brutally honest. The abstract ones seems to work well, but you often don`t mind your material repetition. Others are too simplistic and can be done in a matter of minutes, which completion time does not matter if its presented well and intriquing to the eye (som eof the best designs are quite simple) but you seem to be lacking in presentation for the 3d stuff as well. 3D means you caqn view things from multiple angles, you should attempt to make use of that more. And lastly, you seem to be lacking heavily (no offense meant) on textures and/or materials. You seem to have the basics down, but that won`t suffice for most things. If you`re interested i have a texturing guide to help new video game artists, but it should work well enough for prerendered 3d as well:
Texturing Guide

Both your 3d and logo work should be minimized imo to show only your best, this will help sell your stuff better.

As for the site, i actually like the colors, as you can tell with my site i feel white on black is the way to go
However, its layout does feel a tad template-ish. If you made it yourself i`d recommend mixing the design up a bit, perhaps even implementing some of your graphics into it, in a nice clean manner.
Jarrod19372009-7-29 19:17:43
Ripose

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Jul 29, 2009 7:23 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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OK
I will definitely look into other schemes.

Thank you very much Steve.

Smile & Laugh Everyday Everyone. Life is short!

Ripose

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Jul 30, 2009 3:08 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Jarrod you raise some very important and sensible points.

The graphics were not intended to be representative of my best efforts, since Google can use my work in any way they see fit, even though I do retain copyright.
Also I don`t care if people "steal" these images.

Nonetheless, I regard ALL feedback as vitally important!

Thank you very much for your honest opinion I will take it to heart!

I`m off to check out your site now, have a great day !
Jarrod1937

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Aug 04, 2009 10:49 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Oh ok, since you were charging i figured whats online was meant to be a showcase of your work. Though i am curious what you mean by:
"since Google can use my work in any way they see fit, even though I do retain copyright."

If you`re referring to the terms and conditions of using their service, i have never read anything that will affect your rights as the original creator. As you say, you retain all copyrights and thus have say so on how the stuff is used.
And sure, feel free to contact me here (by pm) if you have any questions, i`d be glad to help. Though i use 3ds max and photoshop, i am not sure what you use.
Jarrod19372009-8-4 22:49:49
Ripose

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Aug 05, 2009 5:26 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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It does state in the Google Terms that they may use anything on the website as they see fit, but they must still give me the credit.

The Fantasy images were created with Bryce, but I will be re-doing them with one of the following:

Mudbox
Maya
3Ds Max
Modo
Cinema 4D
ZBrush
Blender

I have had some setbacks which have slowed down my website development,,, life as usual I guess.
Hope to get it all proper soon.

gustavo

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Aug 15, 2009 1:02 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hello Darcy,
 
Here are my limited and personal opinions, i`am also here to listen yours opinion of my site,
 
I visited your site and your personal photo requires "restoration" and a image with a smile could help, don`t trust in the easy development using google sites.
It doesn`t appears professional a web site powered by google sites.
use a logo, a image not the text "

Graphic Arts by Darcy

Invest more time in your new site Darcy, i`am sorry it it seems anoying =)
Ramiro
 
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