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Aaron -- can you tell me which content you believe should be shaved off?  It`s great to get some else`s perspective since it`s easy for us to be married to our ideas, etc ...

Thanks!!
Jim

PS: Where do you operate?  Do you have a website that we can check out?

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Concierge of Charlotte, LLC
"Start Living!"

www.ConciergeofCharlotte.com
Jim@ConciergeofCharlotte.com

I have to disagree somewhat about the site too busy.  It is, but it is well organized.  I would explain the preferred vendors and move the vendor invitation below the list of vendors, not under the news column.

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Steve Mann
Internet Videographer
MannMade Digital Video
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Good point Steve -- I`ll have to get this done!! 

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Concierge of Charlotte, LLC
"Start Living!"

www.ConciergeofCharlotte.com
Jim@ConciergeofCharlotte.com

hi jim.
you have a great looking website
i have only a little suggestion since the site looks so great:

1. maybe you should enhance navigational graphics on the top. it looks pixelated;
2. on service page, you could bring up titles to your services, maybe put some graphics in replacement to the textlink to get your services more organized;
3. what is the difference between services and solution? aren`t service = solution? get a little confused here;
4. on solution page, i think the space you gave for solution showcase should have a bigger portion than microsoft`s time valuator;
5. maybe you need to use bigger font sizes on information that is more important or that you need to highlight; almost all the text are of the same size, and that perhaps the one problem that people get confused and disoriented on your site;
6. finally, i think you should put all those testimonials in a single page.

that`s it!

awe -- good point on the size of the font and using something other than textual links to bring the services to the foreground of the page.  But for the time being, I prefer the text links for the sake of spiders.

Yes, we need to add more to the solutions page to justify the services (more than the time valuator, but the good thing with that tool is that it quantifies the decision to either use or pass on our services).

The menu buttons on top don`t appear to be pixelated to me ... then again, I need to get my eyes checked!! haha  And I`m dead serious about that!! 


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Concierge of Charlotte, LLC
"Start Living!"

www.ConciergeofCharlotte.com
Jim@ConciergeofCharlotte.com