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Can someone please help with a great pitch for my personal concierge business? I have a deadline of tomorrow morning to decide on something juicy to put on my new bus. cards

So far I have come up with 1) Elite Concierge......because you have better things to do and 2) Elite Concierge......life just got a whole lot easier

I know, i know......not great but thats all I could come up with

Any ideas would be greatly appreciated

Thanks,

Suzi

Thank god you`re here - I really need someone to pick up my dry cleaning.

I don;t have anything to add just yet, but frndchps, about your quote on your profile: Jenna and Barbara Bush seem to be laughing their $% off whenever i see them drunk and fallen down somewhere near a bar - does that bring honor to W?


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Jeff A. Gregory President, Chief Brand Strategist Brand Counsel, LLC     Branding Brilliance    www.brandcounselllc.com

Nice and simple....I like it.....thanks.....do you prefer it over the two i came up with?

 

Suzi

LOL.......thanks

 

Suzi

Alchemy,

Not at all. Rather, it means that the honor of any nation depends on the quality of life of it`s children or citizens, and how happy they are to live in the land. It is a statement of how it should be, not how it is for many peoples. Some European countries are doing a great deal for their people and quality of life. It is a travesty that abuse of power and money are put first before the needs of the people, and no one is laughing about what the idiots in power are doing to this country.

I was thinking of simplicity and to the descriptive point for your business card. If you are using a 10 word pitch or doing advertising, I like the `life just got a whole lot easier.`

Or, it could mean exactly what it says. The United States doesn`t have a king, and we aren`t children.

People in Amsterdam, where drugs are legal and anything goes, certainly seem to be happy and have a great quality of life. Would you call that honor?


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Jeff A. Gregory President, Chief Brand Strategist Brand Counsel, LLC     Branding Brilliance    www.brandcounselllc.com

Thank you so much.......I appreciate you sharing your thoughts.....I hope I can return the favor sometime

 

Suzi

If people in Amsterdam are truly happy and have a great quality of life, I would say this is indeed an honor to the "king" (government) of Netherlands.

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