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Feb 19, 2009 4:45 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hello everyone, I just updated the Parti Productions website and would appreciate some new eyes on the site.  

My business focuses on creating multimedia presentations.  It will focus mainly on media including video, audio and motion graphics.  I tried to break down the pieces of presentations for the viewer within the portfolio.

Let me know if this site is informative and makes you want to contact me or if something doesn`t apeal let me know why & what you would suggest.

Thank you.
Bill Adelstein
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Feb 19, 2009 5:02 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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I`m not sure the point in having to get to the third page of your site before actually getting any useful information. The first 2 pages don`t accomplish anything that couldn`t be done on the third page, you`re just making visitors take a longer way to get there. And the first 2 pages don`t give any indication of what to do to go any further.

Once I actually got to a page that has information, there is an annoying banner at the bottom that is covering part of the content ( in Firefox 3.+ and IE7 ). The menu text is covered up by the menu images ( in Firefox ). If I do a page refresh, I`m back at the first splash page and have to work my way back to content again.

You`re pages are using frames, so your meta tags and content are worthless for search results. I ran your first content page through 2 spider simulators, and they picked up nothing on your page.

In short .... looks and sales pitch aside, it`s buggy, wastes the users time here and there, and will probably not bring you any traffic via searches.



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Feb 19, 2009 6:09 PM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Webline;

Your comment about "making visitor take longer to get there" is noted.  This also relates to the refresh taking you back to splash page.  I was on the fence about this page for some time.
The first page is just my logo - this could go, as I have a smaller version on my home page.
The second page is a definition for parti - but I guess I could put a link on my home page.
There is a QuickTime check page, but I guess I could link to it from the individual portfolio pages.

The banner overlapping the text on the home page will be fixed soon - I`m still trying to find a font that looks good (doesn`t look thin and anemic) on windows browsers.

I`m stumped on the frames issue:  as my site is hosted on Register.com and I have to pay for a site forwarding feature, which I believe creates a frame, which I assume blocks meta tags.

Please comment on my solutions - Do you agree, any further ideas?  I would also appreciate more opinions from others.

Also, how is my sales pitch on the home page?  Any suggestions for improvement?
Is the overall design/graphics ok?

Thanks.    Bill




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